Jack Jordan Poet Tanka

Tanka 11

Tanka 11
	
	
	prickly pear islands
	frost-silvered prairie grassland
	horses grazing   their
	exhaled cloud-breath floating low
	in autumn’s cold morning light
	
	
	
	Written 11.07.2013 for
	Francine Roberts’ contest

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Andrea Dietrich November 9, 2013 at 1:00 AM a great autumn entry, Jack! Jack Jordan November 9, 2013 at 9:12 AM Thanks... Also on the trip south to Dallas. It was a good haiku/tanka morning...

Richard Lamoureux November 8, 2013 at 11:10 AM Beautiful picture! Good luck in the contest. Jack Jordan November 8, 2013 at 11:14 AM Thanks, Richard... jack

Dr.Ram Mehta November 8, 2013 at 4:37 AM You have created nice picture of the autumn apt images, Jack

Donna Jones November 7, 2013 at 10:20 AM Jack..a picture I can so easily visualize ..beautiful! Jack Jordan November 8, 2013 at 8:12 AM Thanks, Donna. 'Tis the season... Jack

Poet Tacito November 7, 2013 at 10:05 AM You capture nature like only a few poets I know. Mother Nature bows to you sir. Jack Jordan November 8, 2013 at 8:11 AM Thank you Drake, for the lovely compliment... Jack