Tanka 001

i shout hello to
          squirrels playing in the sun 
          they all squawk at me 
          i fall on nettles and yowl
          my cat looks on with a smirk
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Achara Avatar
October 5, 2021 at 4:33 PM
Love it....
Olor Avatar
October 5, 2021 at 4:35 PM
Thanks! I’m trying to fix the grammatical errors.
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