Tango With Me

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Come candlelight, tango with me - Your bittersweet, tri-colored braid, Dramatic, stealthy, twined esprit. Your piercing angst, my eyes invade. Your bittersweet, tri-colored braid - Blue, orange, yellow sizzling flame. The piercing angst, my eyes invade. O mi amor - you are not tame. Blue, orange, yellow sizzling flame Your pinta of wax - cold and hot. O mi amor - you are not tame. Stilettos feel the burn, the plot. Your pinta of wax - cold and hot. Dramatic, stealthy, twined esprit. Stilettos feel the burn, the plot. Come candlelight, tango with me. 8/26/2022 Contest: Pantoum - Old or New Sponsor: Joseph May Rhymezone.com and howmanysyllables.com 8 syllables per line *pinta — Appearance; presentation: Includes clothes, grooming, posture, expression, and manner of speaking and relating to the world. **mi amor - my love

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Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/31/2022 12:24:00 PM

This is very well done Kim I really enjoyed your entry, I guess you and I were both in the Tango mood lol, Congrats on your win :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/31/2022 3:02:00 PM

On the same wavelength! Thank you so much xx

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/28/2022 7:19:00 PM

WOW! CONGRATS, Kim, on your win with this red-hot vividly descriptive poem! Janice

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/29/2022 6:56:00 AM

Thank you, Janice!

I Am Anaya

Date: 8/28/2022 5:53:00 PM

Congratulations Kim on your placement! Described her on fire, wild and sprightful, irresistible carried off into an unforgettable dance of romance. Beautiful pictures chosen! Love it

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/28/2022 7:03:00 PM

Thank you, Anaya! Thanks for seeing all of that. Hugs ~ Kim