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And the cemetery was inside a grove of tangled vines and rocks covered in moss. Some toppled stones were scattered in the grass; too many years had gone to honor loss. Too many years had gone to honor loss of souls, that passed one hundred years ago. Their loved ones with them now were looking down upon the toppled stones that lay below. Upon the toppled stones that lay below, now long forgotten in this damp, dark place, these souls had left their mark from earthly life, and tangled vines their memories erased. And tangled vines their memories erased, of loving families who gathered there; and now, so many years have passed away, that only tangled vines and rocks now share. That only tangled vines and rocks now share the memories of those who once were loved. But, toppled stones don't matter anymore... for up in heaven, they are well-beloved. May 7, 2016 ~2nd Place~ Contest: And The Cemetery Was Sponsor: Broken Wings Judged: 06/01/2016

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Date: 6/2/2016 4:25:00 PM
Sandra, congratulations on your win in my contest, I loved your poem, I could see in my mind those tangled vines around the tombs, embracing them and the audio was wonderful, well done, Constance
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Date: 6/2/2016 4:15:00 AM
Beautiful, Sandra:) Congratulations on your wonderful win:)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/2/2016 9:12:00 AM
Thank you very much, Jo. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 6/1/2016 9:21:00 PM
Enjoyed! Congratulations!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/2/2016 9:25:00 AM
Thank you very much, Kim. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 6/1/2016 7:08:00 PM
A beautiful verse, Sandra. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/2/2016 9:24:00 AM
Thank you so much, Joyce. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 6/1/2016 7:07:00 PM
A beautiful verse, Sandra. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/19/2016 7:20:00 AM
Beautiful lines, Sandra, and a meaningful ending. I 'love' cemeteries, and wherever I find an open one I enter and respectfully walk around. Headstones are of much interest. // paul
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Date: 5/18/2016 7:43:00 AM
Excellent. Beautiful write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 5/17/2016 11:31:00 PM
I wasn't aware you could record poems on this site ... perhaps it's a very recent feature? In any case, it adds a little extra something with the voice ... certain nuances that can't quite be captured in text alone (also nice to just hear what poets sound like ... ha ha) ... Liked the way you wrote this, Sandra, with a reminder that the state of the cemetery doesn't matter ... but rather the state of souls.
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Date: 5/17/2016 7:49:00 PM
Wonderful poem, Sandra, great flow.Good luck in the contest :-) Hugs
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