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Tangled Vines



And the cemetery was inside a grove
   of tangled vines and rocks covered in moss.
Some toppled stones were scattered in the grass;
   too many years had gone to honor loss.

Too many years had gone to honor loss
   of souls, that passed one hundred years ago.
Their loved ones with them now were looking down
   upon the toppled stones that lay below.

Upon the toppled stones that lay below,
   now long forgotten in this damp, dark place,
these souls had left their mark from earthly life,
   and tangled vines their memories erased.

And tangled vines their memories erased,
   of loving families who gathered there;
and now, so many years have passed away,
   that only tangled vines and rocks now share.

That only tangled vines and rocks now share
   the memories of those who once were loved.
But, toppled stones don't matter anymore...
   for up in heaven, they are well-beloved.


May 7, 2016

~2nd Place~
Contest: And The Cemetery Was
Sponsor: Broken Wings
Judged: 06/01/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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La France Avatar
June 2, 2016 at 4:25 PM
Sandra, congratulations on your win in my contest, I loved your poem, I could see in my mind those tangled vines around the tombs, embracing them and the audio was wonderful, well done, Constance
Daniel Avatar
June 2, 2016 at 4:15 AM
Beautiful, Sandra:) Congratulations on your wonderful win:)
Haight Avatar
June 2, 2016 at 9:12 AM
Thank you very much, Jo. Hugs, Sandra
Rodrigues Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 9:21 PM
Enjoyed! Congratulations!
Haight Avatar
June 2, 2016 at 9:25 AM
Thank you very much, Kim. Hugs, Sandra
Johnson Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 7:08 PM
A beautiful verse, Sandra. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Haight Avatar
June 2, 2016 at 9:24 AM
Thank you so much, Joyce. Hugs, Sandra
Johnson Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 7:07 PM
A beautiful verse, Sandra. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Callus Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 7:20 AM
Beautiful lines, Sandra, and a meaningful ending. I 'love' cemeteries, and wherever I find an open one I enter and respectfully walk around. Headstones are of much interest. // paul
Sathasivam Avatar
May 18, 2016 at 7:43 AM
Excellent. Beautiful write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
Hicks Avatar
May 17, 2016 at 11:31 PM
I wasn't aware you could record poems on this site ... perhaps it's a very recent feature? In any case, it adds a little extra something with the voice ... certain nuances that can't quite be captured in text alone (also nice to just hear what poets sound like ... ha ha) ... Liked the way you wrote this, Sandra, with a reminder that the state of the cemetery doesn't matter ... but rather the state of souls.
Roper Avatar
May 17, 2016 at 7:49 PM
Wonderful poem, Sandra, great flow.Good luck in the contest :-) Hugs
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