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Tangled Tenebrious Time

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The titans of time bring me back, as I stare at a vision of long ago… memories muffled in their menagerie, serendipitous storms caught between; tangled tenebrious time… as the cathedrals crumble to the ground the memories cyclone within pensive prayers, for I then fall to my knees… hopeless, I egregiously encroach, the battle and the war rages on amidst; tangled tenebrious time… I then seduce the nilpotent night my spirit sorely stands by the wayside, wounded and watching a weighted will… your love limited my longing, imprisoning impulses idling in the beast of; tangled tenebrious time… thus I am back as the visions of you fade. Sept.12.2019 Writing Challenge 2, September 2019 - The Photograph Sponsored by: Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode Placed 4'th...Thank You

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Date: 10/3/2019 5:44:00 PM
WW congratulations on your win in my challenge!
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Date: 9/13/2019 8:30:00 AM
- Powerfully in hopelessness ... great poetic written, W.W. - Best wishes in the contest - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/13/2019 12:55:00 AM
'Thus I am back as the visions of you fade - a faded photograph can last so long, the longing ebbs - but, your love limited my longing, says it all - a thought provoked write, intense and always with dictionary at hand with your poems my dear friend. Well penned ^WW^ Hugs and blessings Jennifer.
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Date: 9/12/2019 6:12:00 PM
"your love limited my longing" ~ A lot said there, Time Traveler ~ nicely done!
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Date: 9/12/2019 11:14:00 AM
Beautifully written bro bro! No matter sad or happy your writing always brings a smile to my face!;)
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