Tangled

I saw an ant
	Tangled in a spider's web
		My heart gave a lurch
As to the ant I said,
	“I am trapped like you,
		And soon I might die too.”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Harper Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 10:32 PM
Very clever Eileen, lovely form and leap beyond the moment, congratulations.
Kendrick Avatar
June 24, 2013 at 12:39 PM
You carried the work to emotional heights with the creative work..Enjoyed reading this one today..Congrats on your win..Sara
Guzzi Avatar
June 20, 2013 at 7:05 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Johnson Avatar
June 20, 2013 at 5:14 PM
Very sad. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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