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Tangled

I saw an ant Tangled in a spider's web My heart gave a lurch As to the ant I said, “I am trapped like you, And soon I might die too.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/29/2013 10:32:00 PM
Very clever Eileen, lovely form and leap beyond the moment, congratulations.
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Date: 6/24/2013 12:39:00 PM
You carried the work to emotional heights with the creative work..Enjoyed reading this one today..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 6/20/2013 7:05:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 6/20/2013 5:14:00 PM
Very sad. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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