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so close and so far - wanting is not enough
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I put my hands on the table after you.. I drink from your half-empty glass.. I sit in your still-warm chair. I signal you but I am a candle at noon.. I call you but I am a snowflake at sea.. Please don't go anywhere without me.. I long to be your shadow. I want to taste you like food.. A hundred emotions tangled like hair ..and trivial words..

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Date: 10/1/2020 5:36:00 AM
A very frustrating situation caring deeply about someone and not even being noticed.
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Date: 10/1/2020 10:26:00 AM
Right??!!

Book: Shattered Sighs