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Written: Apri 26, 2024 For Joseph May Contest 2. Tangerine sunsets composing chrysanthemum hymns
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Immersed in the saffron hues of twilight, I roar out in gloom unsure what to write. A colorful drape and tangerine light, With nook of day and serenade of night. As the wind blusters chrysanthemums swing, Stems capture the final ray of the wing. A hallelujah chant fulfills the sky, Hibiscus awe, soothing hues fade away. Wisteria warmth waits as leading hint, Clad in the melody of the song, splint. Amid whirling dragonflies, stars impede, Junction of neat pearls in ivory bead. Bathed in orange dawn crafted poet light, Chrysanthemums bloom and lyrics glow bright.

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Date: 5/5/2024 6:51:00 AM
Congrats on your win Sotto, Very nicely penned
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Date: 5/4/2024 11:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Tangerine Sunset" write. What a beautiful/colorful picture. Love It... Have a blessed weekend.............
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Date: 4/27/2024 2:33:00 PM
Lasaad, beautifully penned, best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 4/27/2024 1:43:00 PM
Dear Sotto, You have painted an awe-inspiring vista of enduring sweep and magnitude. A landscape of lyrical colour bursts to be found amid the poetic largesse from your pen. Divine visuals inhabit the thoughtful reflections of this piece Many thanks for your review of Yet I Cling Long Version Howard
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Date: 4/27/2024 1:23:00 PM
a colorful and enchanting poem that truly captures the essence of a tangerine sunset. Your imagery was captivating throughout your poem, and the fluidity of your poem is impressive. I especially liked these lines: I roar out in gloom unsure what to write. A colorful drape and tangerine light, With nook of day and serenade of night. Your poem was a pleasurable read. Have a great weekend, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara
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Date: 4/27/2024 12:30:00 PM
Colorfully beautiful, Sotto.
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Date: 4/27/2024 11:51:00 AM
- A beautiful moment bathed in orange ... wonderfully written, Las :) - Nature really has a lot to offer ... something we value more the older you get :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
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Date: 4/27/2024 4:47:00 AM
Wonderfully poetic write, in splendor of images, my friend.--Immersed in the saffron hues of twilight---Chrysanthemums bloom and lyrics glow bright---you were inspired by the prompt line and it shows through every line, Lasaad.
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Date: 4/26/2024 5:46:00 PM
Beautiful poetry Sotto, you capture the elegance of a tangerine sunset magnificently. All the best… Beryl
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Date: 4/26/2024 5:32:00 PM
Your poetry is like a post-impressionist painting. I think Monet would enjoy your work.
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