Tangerine Reverie

lose myself in a tranquil tangerine reverie,
                                  spring birds merrily cooing songs serenade,
       saffron imagination dawns on my dreamy eyes,
                                 fantasy a magical garden, sprinkling faint lemon scent.




                                           May 27, 2021
                            for Liberum Divisa 6 Poetry Contest 
                              Sponsor: Gregory Richard Garden 



                               Original Poem: Reverie In Colours
                                        Sponsor: Emile Pinet
                                              April 13, 2021
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Rose  Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 10:21 AM
You make me want to lean in and inhale your perfumed words, Well done dear poet friend, xo
Fenn Avatar
May 31, 2021 at 12:09 AM
This is beautiful! Now I want to lose myself in a tangerine reverie too!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 31, 2021 at 5:30 AM
Thanks, Jennifer.
Brul Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 2:25 AM
Stunning four-liner poem! Best wishes!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 5:23 AM
Thanks, JCB. Really appreciate your inspiring comment.
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 27, 2021 at 11:51 AM
Hello Mala, this is a lovely scene you paint with your words. love & Friendshop Darlene
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 27, 2021 at 4:01 PM
Hello Mala, this is part of an poem! it is a beautiful old poem. Love & Friendship. Darlene
Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 27, 2021 at 2:36 PM
Thanks, Darlene. This is part of an old poem. Appreciate your kind comment. Love ~ Mala
Hankins Avatar
May 27, 2021 at 8:25 AM
Beautiful images, Malabika, presented in riveting verse. Good job!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 27, 2021 at 9:27 AM
Thank you, Milton. I am so glad you liked the images, and the verse. Really appreciate your inspiring comment. BW ~ Mala
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