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Tameless

Sunshine glistens in your dark raven hair
It causes your devotees to stop and stare
I think that you are oblivious and unaware
Your label should say please handle with care

You are a rare creature I must declare 
Why can't you be tamed? Must I beware?
I want to touch and ride you across the Delaware 
But I’m terrified of your penetrating glare


Alexis Y.
7-24-17

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/26/2017 5:29:00 PM This is really nice. I was at first thinking it was a woman. But now I am thinking it's an animal. Ride it across the Deleware. Hmmmm. Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 7/26/2017 12:30:00 PM Enjoyed reading, Alexis, made me wonder who are you wanting to tame... ? ~* Login to Reply

Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 7/26/2017 11:39:00 AM Another eye-opener, Alexis. You be a on a roll right now. The power of seduction is real. Well told in this cautionary tale. Outstanding poem. Love and hugs. Login to Reply

Eileen Manassian Date: 7/26/2017 1:57:00 AM What a fascinating write, Alexis. Leaves one wanting to read more!! :) Thanks for the visit. I'm on holiday in Cyprus, so I haven't been active much. Hugs, dear. Login to Reply

Lim'Rik Flats Date: 7/24/2017 9:18:00 AM Wow! This one knocks me upside the head. I think I'd turn tail and run from this critter. Some great lines, but more than that this poem does a tap dance on my brain cells and I get that "Wow" thing. Going into my faves. Hugsnickles ~ j Login to Reply

Heidi Sands Date: 7/24/2017 8:33:00 AM What a clear poem Alexis. Be careful of the penetrating glare :) Login to Reply

Cheryl Hoffman Date: 7/24/2017 6:51:00 AM I do declare; be aware of strangers with penetrating glares! Interesting write about a mysterious aloof person Alexis!~Che PS Thank you so much for condolences :) Login to Reply