Tame the Unicorn

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Dawn enveloped in teal veil gown
Divided the woods of chatter 
Rainbow light through pinnacle crown  
First echoes of early laughter 

Nesting lieu for flocks stood apart
Flowers nodded and seemed to smile
Whispers of song in every heart
Unicorn met maiden awhile

She braids his golden mane above
The evening fell the sun went down 
Gaze spark of grace and tender love
A sphere of flames amongst the ground

Moon raised and spied from the night sky
Trembled the stares a lullaby  

11/17/2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 11/18/2016 9:16:00 AM
Hi Eve, I enjoyed this from start to finish. It was so romantic. I found it to be a lovely fantasy that had an enchanting feel to it. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/18/2016 7:49:00 AM
- Eve, I really enjoy this beautiful poem - a 7 - Best wishes for a peaceful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/17/2016 6:25:00 PM
Wow Eve I so love this :)
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Date: 11/17/2016 10:23:00 PM
Thank you, Tim :-):-):-):-):-)
Date: 11/17/2016 6:06:00 PM
Beautifully enchanting Eve. This was such a delight to read, like I was witness to someone's dream. Really nice.
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Date: 11/17/2016 10:22:00 PM
Thank you, Chris, I enjoyed writing this :-) Hugs
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