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Tall Tale

On one summer night’s boldest game We hunted and attacked vicious pirates, Riding on bubble rafts of spokes and rubber Our young skin caressed by the velvet air; This mission devoted for an honored Celtic God. Yielding our mighty wooden swords, We protected the river to save the children From all the evil and greedy villains… While enchanted minds conjured fierce tactics. Across a tousled upland, then down again Through muddy creeks and grass alike, Slingshots whacked the likes of Captain Hook Pausing only for a drink near the meadows. As the four gang mates of the Lost Boys 'The Pan was with us', and Tiger Lily too ; Embarking yet on another episode Till my friends and I dared a shipwreck trap . While moonlight peeped through a blue of cloud, Suddenly, a yell halted our weary feet… Mother's voice chimed, “Guys, time for dinner!” Between reality and play… we still wandered! Contest: Jesse Day's Tell A Tall Tale 7/5/2016

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Date: 7/7/2016 2:41:00 PM
Congrats Nette, for your placement with this lovely piece!! ;-)
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Date: 7/6/2016 6:56:00 PM
Nette, congratulations on your winning and imaginative poem. This is a fun poem to read. ~ Sonia.
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Date: 7/6/2016 2:58:00 PM
Congrats on your Tall Tale well written xx
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Date: 7/6/2016 9:45:00 AM
Bravo! Congrations on the win.
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Date: 7/6/2016 8:01:00 AM
I enjoyed this winning piece! Congrats and a big hug.
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Date: 7/6/2016 2:56:00 AM
Congrats on your win in the "Tell a Tall Tale" contest - Great imagination and use of Mother's voice to bring back reality. - Jesse
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Date: 7/4/2016 9:03:00 PM
Nette, a FANTASTIC tall tale, I loved it 7 ~
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Date: 7/4/2016 4:24:00 PM
Nette, I love the fairy tale and child's play a 7 and good luck in the contest. Thank you so very much for reading my poem “ We Will Drink Some Nectar Sweet”. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/4/2016 1:41:00 PM
- Mother's voice ..... back to reality :) - Great written, Nette :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/4/2016 1:29:00 PM
Fabulous fun story, I remember these sort of days well.Good luck in the contest
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Date: 7/4/2016 12:05:00 PM
This is so lovely!! Good luck in the contest, dear Nette!! :) :)
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