Talking To Myself

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Talking To Myself

Me: You always have your eyes and ears in the tv.

Him: What?

Me: You never hear a word I say.

Him: What?

Me: What did he just say on the tv?

Him: Silence...

Me: You sleeping?

Him: No I was just resting my eyes.

Me: Are you ready for bed?

Him: No I'm not sleepy.

Him: Snore snore snore...

Me: Come on I'm sleepy lets go to bed.



For : Frank H's " The Conversation Contest "
Written By: Carol Brown
01/19/2012
1st Place Winner


Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 2/10/2012 9:32:00 AM
An interesting form, and I like it. And the conversation brings a flood of recollections, and a smile. Wonderful
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Date: 1/25/2012 2:18:00 AM
Congrats congrats indeed Carol! Love it, your simple yet profound poetry is a beautiful craft.
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Date: 1/24/2012 7:09:00 PM
lol, you are funny and your descriptions bring a lot of life in this read. Very nicely done. Awesome imagery and very witty of you!
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Date: 1/24/2012 5:14:00 PM
Thanks, Carol, for your kind comment. Have a great day! Maureen
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Date: 1/24/2012 2:35:00 PM
This sounds exactly like me!! (Typical male) LOL!!...Milt
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Date: 1/24/2012 11:15:00 AM
Hahaha...Yeah, I can definatly relate to this one... Me: Babe your gonna fall asleep Him: No Im not Me: Yes you are your eyes are closed Him: Im just resting them Me: Fine Him: Wake me up if I do Me: Your not suppose to fall asleep Him: Snore snore snore snore Later Me: Wake up sleepy Him: mkughsoighs shut up sdgihsgh im sleeping iihsoihgsoid leave me alone Me: Sigh Lol this happens all the time with me and my boyfriend
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Date: 1/24/2012 10:49:00 AM
Well at least you gave him more lines than you, so it must be "true love" Carol.. enjoyed this, a lot..) and thank you for informing me of the featured poem...
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Date: 1/23/2012 5:59:00 PM
LOL This sound soooo familiar. I know I've had a conversation just like this one before. LOL Gratz one your win. : ) love sammie
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Date: 1/23/2012 12:16:00 PM
I am so happy and thankful to all who have commented and congratulated me on this poem. Have a wonderful day and I hope to soon be able to do the same for you. LOve, Carol
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Date: 1/23/2012 9:37:00 AM
hahahahahahah. this is amusing. Congrats on your win. this is awesome!
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Date: 1/23/2012 8:03:00 AM
Congrats on your win for the contest again, loved,bl
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Date: 1/22/2012 9:33:00 PM
Congratulations on winning in the contest. Simply written and easy to read and understand.
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Date: 1/22/2012 6:50:00 PM
Wonderful !! Sounds so much like many I've had in the distant pass and now with Dad. Congratulations on your win !!
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Date: 1/21/2012 4:25:00 PM
hahaha, that's about right!!! Good one, CARol. Big Congrats.
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Date: 1/21/2012 3:27:00 PM
Yes... men do have selective hearing. It just that they get so focused on what they are doing. A wonderful piece and congratulations on your win Carol, Greg
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Date: 1/21/2012 1:41:00 PM
congrats Carol on a wonderful first place win for this great conversation my friend.. luv..
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Date: 1/21/2012 11:14:00 AM
YEAH!! the good ole days LOL now only the cat holds his tongue! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 1/21/2012 3:52:00 AM
Thanks, Carol, for your kind congrats! Love, Maureen
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Date: 1/20/2012 4:14:00 AM
Haaaaaaaaa! find myself doing that a lot Carol. Be careful, when you start answering yourself. Have a great day, my friend. Agape, Moses
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Date: 1/20/2012 3:29:00 AM
Lol I use the resting the eyes thing a lot... Nice
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Date: 1/19/2012 11:06:00 PM
lol... Carol... don't talk to yourself... Come talk to me... he he he... kidding... lol... sounds like my soul-mate... every time i ask him if he is listening... he always..says.."WHAT!".... GEES! WE DON'T LEARN... ENJOYED,..P.D.
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Date: 1/19/2012 3:42:00 PM
This is too funny Carol I could swear that was me and my husband. Only backwards. He wants to talk and I want to watch T.V. God Bless, JB
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Date: 1/19/2012 3:36:00 PM
sounds about right, a boring night ahead for one and all,j ust a few words is flight, me snore, no not at all, not quite....
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Date: 1/19/2012 3:23:00 PM
This is a wonderful write Carol! You don't listen to yourself, I know I hate it when myself talks to me! I try not to listen, but there I am, always there! i love the line, "...Him: No just resting my eyes." that is my father, to a T! I love this poem! Awesome Work!!
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Date: 1/19/2012 1:30:00 PM
Reads like a winner..That nap while watching TV is called the pre-nap before they go to bed to get the real nap..Great conversation which will be totally understood by most women..Thanks for letting me know that I placed in the contest..Sara
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