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Would you please tell me where I wronged you Said I to Love As we sat close to each other Yet, Distanced! Would you please tell me As I understand not, After all, I simply obeyed the skies, The booms of my heart And the tugs of my senses! I obeyed them all And lay there With my soul bared, With my porous infections exposed With my fragility held tight in your hands! Still, when you broke me I chose to hide my pain Behind sweet civilities And neutral smiles As, Believing in the madness swivelling around the mysticism Which desires our bond Remains A cause meant solely for the mad! I don't understand how I wronged you Maybe the silence, coupled with misunderstanding, That has settled comfortably between us Is to be blamed! Maybe, all it requires is a push of the will As the second hand pushes the minute one As the winds push todays into tomorrows As fate itself pushes souls towards their chosen journey! Still, know that I remain yours To handle with care Or to break with rage I remain yours As your solace is to me What nectar is for bees! I have written for you the day I started to write I have written lines and lines Knowing not that I would cross your path in this world And I shall keep doing so As long as the body that carries me Still has enough strength in it to allow me to! 21st June 2019

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Date: 7/4/2019 6:33:00 PM
I just discovered your poetry and love it, so I will "fav" you.
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Date: 6/22/2019 11:27:00 AM
Anoucheka, you're one of the best poets on this site, in my opinion. Your poetry never fails to floor me, and this one is no different!
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 6/22/2019 11:49:00 AM
Wow! Thks Edward :)
Date: 6/21/2019 9:21:00 AM
Wow. One of the best I have read in a long time (and I have read a great many wonderful poems). So evocative, emotional, loyal, beautiful. I am very touched by it.
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Date: 6/21/2019 10:10:00 AM
Thk you so much for the feedback :)