Talk About Aging

You want me to talk about aging, But my bones are still holding true My fingers, elongated, and now, a wedding ring Yes, I'm still in my twenties, it's true. But I remember when I was three feet tall And the world was as small as I... But now I have: a husband to hold my hand, A Bachelors degree, a new home, a new sky. So now, let's talk about aging Though my hair's still silky and gold, My eyes see things I never could before And soon- my arms- a baby to hold... Yes, let's talk about aging How a girl becomes a wife How a wife becomes a mother... And it changes her world, her life.
**For the Aging Contest Written June 6, 2019**

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Date: 6/9/2019 5:51:00 PM
Time goes by so quickly. Nice write Juli. "Our days on earth are like grass; like wildflowers we bloom and die. The wind blows, and we are gone- as though we had never been here." (Psalm 103:16)
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Date: 6/8/2019 7:10:00 AM
You just don't age fast enough Juli lol...lovely write my friend...me, I'm old enough to be your older poetic friend lol... best of luck...^WW^
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Allen Beilschmidt Sr.
Date: 6/9/2019 5:51:00 PM
"Our days on earth are like grass; like wildflowers we bloom and die. The wind blows, and we are gone- as though we had never been here." (Psalm 103:16)
Date: 6/7/2019 11:42:00 AM
Enjoy your beautiful trip to the future, especially with a growing child Good Luck!
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Date: 6/7/2019 9:38:00 AM
Yes, even you are aging, my dear! you have the 40's to look forward to now. That is a very good decade, speaking from experience. Can't say as much good after 60. hahaha. GREAT poem about the beginning of adulthood.
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Allen Beilschmidt Sr.
Date: 6/9/2019 5:52:00 PM
"Our days on earth are like grass; like wildflowers we bloom and die. The wind blows, and we are gone- as though we had never been here." (Psalm 103:16)
Date: 6/6/2019 3:39:00 PM
so true... Ty. I enjoyed this one.
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Date: 6/6/2019 2:12:00 PM
oh wow having a child is the most amazing experience and it definitely makes you grow up when you have the responsibility of a little one - superb write on a different angle to aging, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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