Tales of Light - 2 Point 1

I
Without computing Light Years (LY)
Rain could join Space-Time
For making accessible rainbows

II
I walked under - the greatest Arch
White-clad sprites streamed promises -
edible flavors, rainbow colors
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George Avatar
January 19, 2022 at 10:26 PM
A wonderful mind scape you have created where I see angels clad in white, fluttering around you with rainbow in their hands.... ! Lovely !
Deo Avatar
January 19, 2022 at 11:07 AM
Wow, Vijay Bhai, thanks a million. I liked it, but until fellow poets offer even a bit if validation, I wonder ... Glad it communicated. It was a massive / real rainbow. Anil
Pandit Avatar
January 19, 2022 at 6:39 AM
This is creativity my friend. Splendid vocabulary emboldens your write. I enjoyed your exploration, Anil. Into my FAVES.
Horsman Avatar
January 18, 2022 at 6:41 PM
Love the rainbow, and how you bask there and create wonderful poetry
Deo Avatar
January 19, 2022 at 5:05 AM
Blessings Sir Harry. Man of Perth and great worth
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