Tale of the Night Movers

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*Image of Lovers Night by Pinterest. Tale of The Night Movers Hail, a phantom moon traversing its cloaked chambered recesses of her prevalent crown. Unspool gently and host minding eyes immersed within your ethereal pull exacting Cupid's pursuit impresses dependably. Slay suspicious initiatives yond hints of their riddled hearts pausing serenity and tryst capers a fullness until dawning climbs to a whispering. Anticipatory confidences secure immature adoration, gift a sense of a certain fling, for shared planned proof that sensorial alliance is immortal. Abiding hearts, minds, and souls and that its permanence lingers in all three entities to be truly entrusted versus all hardships that dare. Any challenge purposeth distraction swayed to disrupt sanctioned harmony and impose their nightly fight and an easy win over the weak. Lovers supposed union is but a temporal existence, and Cupid's aim slumbered apiece, held in stasis as hostages host for thoughts to fester. A mire of serendipity and wished upon measures of advice, out from this unlit pullback of the unimaginative lost, but hail to the victorious and glorious. Righteous grit encountering the opaque influences of damaging desires to hoodwink the candid that wore down night's ethical battle and fortuitous claim. Justified inevitableness outlasts twilight's hold by conquering the gloaming tripped-upon dawn's call ends nightmarish corps to collapse. Cherubs reward a star's chariot ascent who condones a handheld coursing and are hereby blessed with a kiss of permanence and a dreamt descent. 2022 July 30

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Anisha Dutta

Date: 1/13/2023 5:36:00 AM

It’s the best of your five examples for contest. I admire. I am whelmed. Happy New Year. Blessings

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/13/2023 7:10:00 AM

I am very appreciative of your thoughtful sentiment, Anisha, and yes, whenever I post poems that will engage the potential entries of what is intended, I track the readership to measure which of my examples were of interest--this one leads way ahead out of 5--a Happy 2023 my friend, Aloha William

Eric Cohen

Date: 8/6/2022 3:00:00 PM

This one caught my eye because one of my hobbies is Milky Way photography. The poem blew me away because it is as moving as the picture is hauntingly beautiful. ~Eric

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/6/2022 9:35:00 PM

This and another skipped the notification process. Oh well, thanks for the piqued interest, and I'm quite taken back by your intrigue. Much obliged in-kind Eric, Aloha~William