Jack Horne Poet Limerick

Tale of a Tail

My craziest time under water
was diving with Godzilla's daughter -
she spotted a whale
and gnawed at its tail,
and ruined the snorkel I'd bought 'er.

written 26th July for Caren's Craziest Time Under contest

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Jennifer Proxenos September 6, 2020 at 4:45 AM Ha Ha Ha, loved it - I see I've commented but I read it again, so commenting again. Hugs, Jennifer.

Linda Alice Fowler August 21, 2020 at 3:46 PM I love this Jack! Definitely made me giggle.

Jennifer Proxenos August 4, 2020 at 10:49 AM Such a laugh, but everyone else thinks so too. I think writing funny so that you really make people laugh is one of hardest styles of poetry - you always do it - kudos Jack. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer

Phyllis Babcock July 29, 2020 at 8:21 PM Sounds funny and filled with humor Jack. love phyl

Harry Horsman July 28, 2020 at 11:42 PM Oh this is brilliant, right from the title down through the poem, to it's tail...

Sara Kendrick July 28, 2020 at 5:07 PM Ha!! Ha!! Reads like a good contender. Sara

Andrea Dietrich July 26, 2020 at 8:09 PM you are so good with humor, Jack. GREAT job.

Paul Callus July 26, 2020 at 3:28 PM Thank you for a hearty laugh, Jack :) Very creative, I should say! Regards // paul

Jan Allison July 26, 2020 at 1:13 PM omg this is hilarious love it jack, i am hoping your limerick inspires me to write some fun poems:-) hugs Jan xx

Carolyn Devonshire July 26, 2020 at 11:18 AM LOL Sooo funny, Jack! Best wishes in the contest. Bet you won't snorkel with Godzilla's daughter again:) Hugs, Carolyn