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Tale of a Tail

My craziest time under water was diving with Godzilla's daughter - she spotted a whale and gnawed at its tail, and ruined the snorkel I'd bought 'er. written 26th July for Caren's Craziest Time Under contest

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Date: 9/6/2020 4:45:00 AM
Ha Ha Ha, loved it - I see I've commented but I read it again, so commenting again. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 8/21/2020 3:46:00 PM
I love this Jack! Definitely made me giggle.
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Date: 8/4/2020 10:49:00 AM
Such a laugh, but everyone else thinks so too. I think writing funny so that you really make people laugh is one of hardest styles of poetry - you always do it - kudos Jack. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer
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Date: 7/29/2020 8:21:00 PM
Sounds funny and filled with humor Jack. love phyl
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Date: 7/28/2020 11:42:00 PM
Oh this is brilliant, right from the title down through the poem, to it's tail...
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Date: 7/28/2020 5:07:00 PM
Ha!! Ha!! Reads like a good contender. Sara
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Date: 7/26/2020 8:09:00 PM
you are so good with humor, Jack. GREAT job.
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Date: 7/26/2020 3:28:00 PM
Thank you for a hearty laugh, Jack :) Very creative, I should say! Regards // paul
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Date: 7/26/2020 1:13:00 PM
omg this is hilarious love it jack, i am hoping your limerick inspires me to write some fun poems:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/26/2020 11:18:00 AM
LOL Sooo funny, Jack! Best wishes in the contest. Bet you won't snorkel with Godzilla's daughter again:) Hugs, Carolyn
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