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Tale of a Retired Comedian



  
      Comedian in a silver caravan,
             Better than living in Yucatan.
   
       Found her a hot, young, man,
              Sitting in the sun, getting so tan.
   
       Under the moon, she rocked that van.
               Wild comedian, and her tanned man!


                            7/7/2024

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Elena Eagle

Date: 7/9/2024 1:21:00 PM

This poem was so fun to read and enjoy. Loved this one today.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/9/2024 1:51:00 PM

Yes, EW, thank you for your input Pangie

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/8/2024 7:46:00 PM

Ha, ha, ha, ha! What a way to make a living! :) gw

Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/8/2024 8:05:00 PM

In the tile of this work, the FABELED comedian had aleady earned a handsome living on stage. She was doing anything but working, are you kidding? She’d found a younger man she was not a “ woman” of the streets. This was not a morality write nor was it judgemental! It was simply meant to be lighthearted. Thanks G~~ Pangie

Deb M

Date: 7/8/2024 2:48:00 PM

Pangie…l bet you have a few naughty tales to tell ….you certainly seemed to have lived and enjoyed life to its fullest! As we all should. Loved this saucy little number haha!! Debx

Deb M
Date: 7/8/2024 4:48:00 PM

Haha…I am sorry Pangie ….l just assumed it was about you as l know you were a stand up comedian and from your poems you seem to have a great zest for life! Your comment made me smile! Debx

Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/8/2024 4:23:00 PM

Deb, do you think I really had this experience? Roflmao., no never. But if it came across that way, the better. I have had life experiences that are beyond belief.! One has to willing to take chances to live a fun life!! That is how it works for me. Living to please others,is like drinking poison for me. I am nobodys’puppy dog. I prefer to bite! More fun.**Bite,before you get bitten! (Thats a silly one for you.) Pangie

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/8/2024 2:37:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your fun write. Thanks for the laugh. I needed it... Have a fun day writing away............

Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/8/2024 4:30:00 PM

Thanks Paua, I have a picturesque mind. I could vividly imagine the whole scene. It made ne laugh. It all srated from one word, caravan. And grw from words rhyming woth thar one word. Pangie