Tale of a Messiah

He made them believe
He was the real messiah
The mystic leader 
who would take them to Zion
His followers threw themselves 
into icy pools of water 
Rended their clothes 
in a frenzy of belief 
When he came out of the Sultan's home 
wearing a fez 
Only a few belivers stayed on 
his wavelength 
How long must we wait for 
the true messiah to reveal himself?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Agustin Avatar
April 25, 2026 at 4:47 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Maverick Avatar
July 31, 2017 at 1:28 AM
I also have 2 witnesses one I texted miles away and he looked up and saw, also a man I sort of dragged out of his vehicle to show.' 'he said he was taught to believe there was no God and Ihave the photos.' And I emailed photos off as well.'
Maverick Avatar
July 31, 2017 at 1:24 AM
Just coming back to this one Matt I feel I must say 'something on this' no 'man' knows the time or hour Jesus also says I will not leave you as orphans John ch 14v18 acts ch 2v17-19 if you look on the internet under 'fire Ange'l south Carolina you will find what is described as a metrelogical phenomena the sun must be 58 degrees in the sky the thing is I only found the fire Angel after witnessing a line of clouds on fire at nearly 5 noon I went home & did a cloud in flames search & there He was
Schack Avatar
February 7, 2017 at 9:15 PM
not too much to say matthew, but i do like your poems and you as well. be well. daniel schack
Mac Donald Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 11:04 AM
Some days, it appears as though He might soon reveal Himself, Matthew? We seem to be living in a world of war, false prophets, and natural catastrophes. When and what will be the deciding moment? Definitely something to ponder.:( Keep well and please be happy! Mikki
A   Avatar
March 12, 2016 at 11:37 AM
Hi, Matt, I miss reading your poems, I just moved to Houston, it's going to take another two weeks to unpack and organize everything the way I want and like. LOL... My room is going to be the same theme. :) except I'm moving the zebra theme out into the living room. Anyways, just stopping in to say hi and read your latest poem. Hugs. LINDA
Kendrick Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 7:27 AM
I don't think it will be very long..Great work..Sara
Onclaud Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 12:39 PM
an absorbing write that makes me wonder of how we shall know the truth when revelation comes... great to see you on my page, matthew.. thanks and huggs
Carrillo Avatar
June 11, 2014 at 3:05 PM
This is something to think about. I think that no one will know, until it's time. so we have to stay on the right track. Thanks for sharing. ... Lucilla
A   Avatar
January 14, 2014 at 11:31 AM
Matt, a true question... How long must we wait... great poem... Linda
Kendrick Avatar
January 10, 2014 at 4:58 PM
I believe that it could be soon but no one except the Father knows the day and hour..Enjoyed reading your faith based work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Maverick Avatar
September 7, 2013 at 11:23 PM
Enjoyed reading this one today Matthew; Hope you are well, I see you have been busy..'
Hicks Avatar
June 21, 2013 at 1:32 AM
Many false prophets will make themselves known before the real ones show up. Cults and such always held a small amount of fascination for me... just what drives people to follow such ridiculous notions? Cool story!
Collins Avatar
May 25, 2013 at 7:34 AM
Dear Matthew - Brilliant! The tomfoolery of Jonestown (well maybe not so evil). love, Kathy
Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar
March 27, 2013 at 1:48 PM
Great write, Matthew! I do believe, those who want to will be led to Zion by Jesus Christ, the only Messiah. God himself, through His Holy Spirit, will tell everyone of us who listen to Him, who the Messiah is, when He comes to reign over us and prepare us for the Kingdom of His Father. Amen. Blessings, Hanitra
Dietrich Avatar
March 26, 2013 at 11:50 PM
makes me curious to know who this one was! What's a fez? by the way, I don't like golf . I think it is a big bore but if I were ever single again, I think it would be a sport worth taking up. haha
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September 7, 2013 at 11:16 PM
I shall put your mind at rest Andrea.. A fez is the small hat with a tassell such as morroco mole used to wear..hey' maybe this write is about him..!
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