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Taking the Bait

I’m in a boat can you see me p s i s i c a n g j u s t k i d d i n g I’m in a boat can you see me v i a n w g Come on in Let’s take a swim m a n V R O R O E B A D ~~~~~~~~~ \…………/

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Date: 6/10/2025 6:49:00 PM
Such an amazing work. Congrats, Ma'am Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/10/2025 7:01:00 PM
Thank you so much, Bernard!
Date: 6/9/2025 11:38:00 PM
I think this is only the 2nd Strandized placed poem that has absolutely entertained me; the art, the wit - you are very clever w/ this. I look at the keyboard and look and look, nothing comes to me except the want for more 'creating-keys!' BS actually placed me, never noticed/thought about his initials before - parents shouldn't do that! CayCay
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/10/2025 4:38:00 AM
I am so glad that it entertained you! You are funny, CayCay!
Date: 6/9/2025 11:04:00 PM
Cute and creative. Congrats, Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/10/2025 4:39:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea! Hugs
Date: 6/9/2025 3:38:00 PM
We poets have overboard minds, lol. Awesome write- <3 xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/9/2025 4:32:00 PM
LOL! xxoo
Date: 6/9/2025 9:10:00 AM
Quite funny.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/9/2025 12:24:00 PM
Happy you thought so, my friend! lol
Date: 6/9/2025 8:01:00 AM
ha! very creative, kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/9/2025 12:23:00 PM
Thank you, Ilene! So glad you liked this one! :)

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