Kim Rodrigues Poet Free verse

Taking the Bait

I’m in a boat
  can you see me

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I’m in a boat
   can you see me

  v  i
 a     n
w        g

Come on in

Let’s take a swim

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    n

    V     R    O    R
O     E     B    A     D
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Bernardo F. Asuncion June 10, 2025 at 6:49 PM Such an amazing work. Congrats, Ma'am Kim. Kim Rodrigues June 10, 2025 at 7:01 PM Thank you so much, Bernard!

CayCay Godwin June 9, 2025 at 11:38 PM I think this is only the 2nd Strandized placed poem that has absolutely entertained me; the art, the wit - you are very clever w/ this. I look at the keyboard and look and look, nothing comes to me except the want for more 'creating-keys!' BS actually placed me, never noticed/thought about his initials before - parents shouldn't do that! CayCay Kim Rodrigues June 10, 2025 at 4:38 AM I am so glad that it entertained you! You are funny, CayCay!

Andrea Dietrich June 9, 2025 at 11:04 PM Cute and creative. Congrats, Kim Kim Rodrigues June 10, 2025 at 4:39 AM Thank you, Andrea! Hugs

Paige Hind June 9, 2025 at 3:38 PM We poets have overboard minds, lol. Awesome write- <3 xxoo Kim Rodrigues June 9, 2025 at 4:32 PM LOL! xxoo

Victor Buhagiar June 9, 2025 at 9:10 AM Quite funny. Kim Rodrigues June 9, 2025 at 12:24 PM Happy you thought so, my friend! lol

Ilene Bauer June 9, 2025 at 8:01 AM ha! very creative, kim! Kim Rodrigues June 9, 2025 at 12:23 PM Thank you, Ilene! So glad you liked this one! :)