Taking Over Me

In this desolate room,
I feel this endless gloom
Taking over me. . .
Taking over me. . . 
Making my bones rattle in shock
Making several crackling sounds . . .
The time is ticking fast
I need to taste hope again
This time,
I will not give up
Neither will I toil in grief
I’m seeking permanent relief
I keep spinnin’ around the place,
Searching for ways to beat this race
Just to see your face 
See your face

(chorus)

Sometimes, I wait here…on my own,
Yearning for some significance
Sometimes, I feel like my mind’s blown
Churning. . . twisting. . . contorting. . . 
In a wild whirlpool…
What happened to my existence?
Am I of any importance?
It must be gravity taking a toll on me
 Something’s missing possibly. . . 
It must be me pretending that I don’t see
The brighter side of things
But, the abyss is……
Taking over me. . .
Taking over me. . .
Swallowing me like a terrible tide ~ ~ ~

I feel this overwhelming tension
Taking over me. . .
Taking over me. . . 
I look up to you willingly
Something’s haunting me…
Something’s making me feel so
Disheartened 
Pardon me,
I need some space 
Excuse me for a moment or two…
Let me gain back my pure grace
Just to see your face
See your face

(chorus)

Sometimes, I wait here…on my own,
Yearning for some significance
Sometimes, I feel like my mind’s blown
Churning. . . twisting. . . contorting. . . 
In a wild whirlpool…
What happened to my existence?
I sense that there’s gonna be a storm at this very minute
It must be the thunder taking a toll on me
 Something’s tearing me apart,
Making me sink down…
To my lowest state of mind
It must be me pretending that I don’t see
The optimistic road ahead
But, the abyss is……
Taking over me. . .
Taking over me. . .
Swallowing me like a gigantic tide ~ ~ ~

Can you feel my anxiety
Taking over me?
Taking advantage of me?
Making me subside from the Pathway of Prosperity?
I feel like an Outcast 
That loneliness shaking me up
Is taking over me…
Taking over me…

(chorus)

Sometimes, I sleep here in solitude,
Wonderin’ if someone out there will save me
Save me…save me…set me free…
From this abominable dwelling place called Shame
Sometimes, I feel that everything’s out of my reach and I’m left to be
Taken over by my utter despair and catastrophe…
If I’m here alone with me,
I’ll find a way to flee…
Flee to safety… 

I’m shedding tears of frustration 
Please understand this pain that burns immensely 
Deep inside of me forever it seems
Inside of me...not mending my broken dreams
Taking over me…
Don’t underestimate it…
Or it will track you down someday…
It will prey upon you someday
Do you even notice me from afar?
Do you hear my plea?
My plea for your love 
To get me out of this desolate room
I’m overflowing with disdainful gloom. . . 

Rescue my heart from these tears…
These tears
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Beaufort Avatar
April 23, 2014 at 6:34 PM
David, this is a song of despair, but there seems to be some hope here. I wonder how you come up with these lines? If you fee this way, I am hopeful that you will find meaningful companionship and friendship. Personally, I would ask you out, (but I am married and taken). So, we still can be friends and comment on each other's lines. You have so much going for you, I sincerely wish that you feel no shame for any of your thoughts and feelings. Being a male and young in this society is tough.
Williams Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 9:56 AM
Just stopping by to check out your work, nice writing here no doubt. You've got some talent and I did enjoy it trip through this work. Thanks for sharing David
Lamoureux Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 8:31 AM
This is an anthem of deppresion. A very effective piece. I think you might appreciate my poem "Dark Lover" I must say your talent is undeniable.
Manassian Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 8:00 AM
Very deep poem. You have a wonderful way with words. You had me feel the desperation...and...yes, I've been there too. The abyss...never too far away. I hope you have seen brighter days since this write. Do take care, my dear.
Allison Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 7:01 AM
Oh what heartbreaking deep and dark lyrics David this actually brought tears to my eyes by the end. Hugs Jan x
Allison Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 7:26 AM
amazing how our emotions just spill out into our poems - best way just let it flow. Hugs Jan x
Breidenthal Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 7:21 AM
Oh sorry, ma'am ... I felt that way for some odd reason still unknown to me. Thanks :)
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