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Taking My Camel To Town

I’m taking my camel to town, do you got a problem with that? I’m gonna get him some fresh water and clean provender What cha say, they don’t sell to his kind?! He’s the finest mottled brown, this side of the Sahara desert sand This camel got the blackest spots mixed in Proof that the sun calls him his friend While I’m in town, I’m gonna buy my beautiful animal a white straw hat Do you have a problem with that?

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Date: 6/29/2017 3:29:00 PM
This is so cute :) made me laugh. I read it to my 10 yr old granddaughter. Sometimes she helps me write. Dark Moonlight, Vampire Heart are two of them.
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Date: 6/29/2017 9:20:00 AM
No problem with your brevity poem! A wonderful one it is!
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Date: 6/28/2017 7:10:00 PM
Whether one hump or two..no problem...Nicely penned Freddie
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Date: 6/28/2017 7:05:00 PM
this is so FUN. I love a poem like this, Freddie. NOPE, I don't have a problem with THAT!
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Date: 6/28/2017 2:22:00 PM
I can't see why you'd have a problem, this being 'hump day' and all. BA DOOP PSHHHHHHH!
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Date: 6/28/2017 10:57:00 AM
How easy it is to stereotype. Being different is never easy, Freddie. A deep poem written with the understanding of a wise man:)
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Date: 6/28/2017 10:48:00 AM
So was this camel a soft caramel color? My friend, you can bring your camel to my town any day, we have plenty of nice hats to chose from. Nicely fun and creatively crafted.
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Date: 6/28/2017 9:49:00 AM
No problem with that. This is a fun poem to vision the camel with a hat :)
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Date: 6/28/2017 9:41:00 AM
I don't Freddie - but might you think the camel may be a tad embarrassed and eat his hat - Perhaps a soft suede brown one may be more to his liking - Funny - a Camel with a hat!!! love it - hope your camel does too...Maria
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