Takeoff

cold windblown down feathers dot the forming ice

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/20/2023 8:35:00 AM

Congratulations on this winning work in the contest. Way to go. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/20/2023 2:12:00 AM

- Congratulations on your beautiful Lanterne in Joseph May's contest, John :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/19/2023 8:04:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your "Takeoff" write. Guess winter will be here soon. Have a blessed day/week......................

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 11/18/2023 12:51:00 PM

good, impactful use of language in this brief form - congrats on your win in the contest

Joseph May

Date: 11/18/2023 3:09:00 AM

Congrats on your win John, Nicely done

Ink Empress

Date: 11/18/2023 2:33:00 AM

Beautiful lanterne. Congratulations on your well deserved win . Loved reading this

Lin Lane

Date: 11/15/2023 12:34:00 PM

Mouth to beak, John.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 11/15/2023 12:12:00 AM

Always interesting, intriguing, insightful... with so few words... wonderful writing,. God bless you, love, Gina

Bill Baker

Date: 11/14/2023 8:35:00 PM

Nice Lanterne poem, John. Is this for a contest? Good luck if it is, my friend. Well written to form. Have a great week! Bill