Takeoff

cold
windblown
down feathers
dot the forming
ice
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kendrick Avatar
November 20, 2023 at 8:35 AM
Congratulations on this winning work in the contest. Way to go. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K
Andresen Avatar
November 20, 2023 at 2:12 AM
- Congratulations on your beautiful Lanterne in Joseph May's contest, John :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
November 19, 2023 at 8:04 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your "Takeoff" write. Guess winter will be here soon. Have a blessed day/week......................
Puddifoot Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 12:51 PM
good, impactful use of language in this brief form - congrats on your win in the contest
May Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 3:09 AM
Congrats on your win John, Nicely done
Empress Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 2:33 AM
Beautiful lanterne. Congratulations on your well deserved win . Loved reading this
Lane Avatar
November 15, 2023 at 12:34 PM
Mouth to beak, John.
Mcintosh Avatar
November 15, 2023 at 12:12 AM
Always interesting, intriguing, insightful... with so few words... wonderful writing,. God bless you, love, Gina
Baker Avatar
November 14, 2023 at 8:35 PM
Nice Lanterne poem, John. Is this for a contest? Good luck if it is, my friend. Well written to form. Have a great week! Bill
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