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it must have happened
when I as wee
stolen from my small bed
to the arms of fairy
was I led.
now I dwell in both
my body here
my mind flies free.
as I age and time sands  
my thoughts
are more oft in that land
where the heart is forever young.

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Date: 11/30/2017 2:53:00 PM
Beautiful poetic expressions, Pat. A very exhilarating wistful thought poem. Your pen is forever young, that's for sure. Wonderful poem. Love and smiles always.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 12/1/2017 5:30:00 PM
Thank you Freddie.
Date: 11/26/2017 8:38:00 AM
What a delightful pen Patricia! It brings to mind The Little Prince for me, never lose your child's point of view. Love this one :) xomo <3
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 11/26/2017 12:20:00 PM
Thanks Maureen.
Date: 11/25/2017 6:36:00 PM
O Patricia - what a delightfully whimsical poem. Love it.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 11/25/2017 7:21:00 PM
Thank you Line. I think there is more in my mind to add.
Date: 11/25/2017 6:00:00 PM
That's a real gift, I think! I'd like to develop a child like mind. Sweet and beautiful poetry.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 11/25/2017 6:12:00 PM
Thank you Sunny one.

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