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I was taken for a ride
by another poets desire
to take my love
and warp it from above
but I got wise
to love in desguise
and I became stronger
my intuitions longing
for flying friendly skies
buying the ticket
waiting in line
the thrill of this chase
got me thinking
is this a 
 wonderful ride
or Satan's demise
so I took the time
to comprehend
that this game
wasn't my time
to explore my mind
in finding
the thrill ride
was just a game
in a players find
minding his rhyming
for pleasures of
unwinding inside
so I tore up 
the ticket
and walked away
thinking
to myself
I'm glad 
I ended
this game played
so I could 
be myself
with my quest
for real love
in playing
my way

Cowboy. KID ROCK  song.
Lunatic Fringe. RED RIDER song.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/26/2016 8:34:00 AM
I can definitely relate to this. You have expressed this situation nicely in your poem.
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Date: 10/26/2016 7:53:00 PM
thanks chris. I'm am an instant fan of your writing.

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