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I was taken for a ride by another poets desire to take my love and warp it from above but I got wise to love in desguise and I became stronger my intuitions longing for flying friendly skies buying the ticket waiting in line the thrill of this chase got me thinking is this a wonderful ride or Satan's demise so I took the time to comprehend that this game wasn't my time to explore my mind in finding the thrill ride was just a game in a players find minding his rhyming for pleasures of unwinding inside so I tore up the ticket and walked away thinking to myself I'm glad I ended this game played so I could be myself with my quest for real love in playing my way Cowboy. KID ROCK song. Lunatic Fringe. RED RIDER song.

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Date: 10/26/2016 8:34:00 AM
I can definitely relate to this. You have expressed this situation nicely in your poem.
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Date: 10/26/2016 7:53:00 PM
thanks chris. I'm am an instant fan of your writing.

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