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In poetry, i will to lose myself... completly.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/5/2018 12:15:00 PM

Hello Ray Write, welcome to Poetry Soup. Yes we poets and poetess all lose our selves when we create our poetry. I would like to see more poetry from you. Have a nice day my friend.

Ray Write
Date: 6/18/2018 1:44:00 AM

Thank you. I trully appreciate and be blessed.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 4/29/2018 10:53:00 AM

Love this piece! That's what it takes to read and write great poems - losing one's self completely! This reads like a great haiku, my friend! Well done! Hugs. Pandita

Ray Write
Date: 6/18/2018 1:44:00 AM

Thank you.