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Take water, what do you know about it? it has an almost magical existence yet does it start as a cloud? or is evaporation from bodies of water? The answer amazingly is, its a byproduct when stars are born a strong outward wind of gas and dust forms, the shockwaves compress and heat it forming water and vapour Next time you have a drink, Think in your hand you hold birth remember you also hold a star What a miraculous thing is water it keeps us from extinction the sheer beauty delights as it bounces sparkles and twinkles Transparent and crystal clear it holds so many life forms all invisible to the naked eye Water

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Date: 7/9/2013 2:59:00 PM
Shadow, amazing....PD
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Date: 7/10/2013 2:33:00 PM
Ty Linda it water that's amazing Shadow x smiles
Date: 7/9/2013 2:01:00 PM
starry eyed by this fine write, shadow... a beauty!..:)
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Date: 7/10/2013 2:37:00 PM
Ty Nette happy you enjoyed it Shadow x smiles
Date: 7/9/2013 7:28:00 AM
Shadow, I so agree that water is a magical thing, well done and I also want to thank you so much for my placement in your Fantasy Contest, I am very honoured, Constance
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Date: 7/10/2013 2:40:00 PM
Hi Constance we don't stop enough to think about the magic that is all around us. You wrote a great poem ty for taking part Shadow x smiles
Date: 7/9/2013 5:14:00 AM
Excellent. Very thoughtful and inspiring write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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Date: 7/10/2013 2:41:00 PM
Hi Ravi and ty for your nice comments Shadow x smiles

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