Take Water

Take water, what do you know about it?
it has an almost magical existence
yet does it start as a cloud?
or is evaporation from bodies of water?

The answer amazingly is, its a byproduct
when stars are born a strong outward wind 
of gas and dust forms,  the shockwaves compress
and heat it forming water and vapour

Next time you have a drink, 
                   Think
in your hand you hold birth
remember you also hold a star

What a miraculous thing is water
it keeps us from extinction
the sheer beauty delights
as it bounces sparkles and twinkles

Transparent and crystal clear
it holds so many life forms
all invisible to the naked eye
                   Water
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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July 9, 2013 at 2:59 PM
Shadow, amazing....PD
Hamilton Avatar
July 10, 2013 at 2:33 PM
Ty Linda it water that's amazing Shadow x smiles
Onclaud Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 2:01 PM
starry eyed by this fine write, shadow... a beauty!..:)
Hamilton Avatar
July 10, 2013 at 2:37 PM
Ty Nette happy you enjoyed it Shadow x smiles
La France Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 7:28 AM
Shadow, I so agree that water is a magical thing, well done and I also want to thank you so much for my placement in your Fantasy Contest, I am very honoured, Constance
Hamilton Avatar
July 10, 2013 at 2:40 PM
Hi Constance we don't stop enough to think about the magic that is all around us. You wrote a great poem ty for taking part Shadow x smiles
Sathasivam Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 5:14 AM
Excellent. Very thoughtful and inspiring write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
Hamilton Avatar
July 10, 2013 at 2:41 PM
Hi Ravi and ty for your nice comments Shadow x smiles
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