Just That Archaic Poet Poet Rhyme

Take Two and Call Me In the Morning

Poetic Terrorist- flagrant Errorist!
While all I write feels meritless
And all I do seems perilous!
Chalk it up to being careless...

My Heart, my Mind- about to burst!
Born, was I, a Soul accursed...
A million wounds I have nursed
Still I feel always the worse

Send helicopters full of doctors-
Tell me, what is their diagnosis?
Oh! the Tests conclude I'm awkward!
(What a bleak and poor prognosis!)

*Old experimental piece

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Robin Davis October 15, 2013 at 9:08 AM My poet friend This may be experimental but it passes all the tests of a great write. And if being awkward is bleak, then I have the same diagnosis. LOL Hugs Just That Archaic Poet October 16, 2013 at 7:58 AM lol Thanks for the laugh and review, Robin ;)

Mustapha Mohammed October 10, 2013 at 6:43 PM If this experimental then I would have to stand for the serious ones...lol. Good job my dear Archaic. You seem to write like everyday, I envy that lol. My inspiration don't come as freely as yours do. I've penned two simple poems today, check them out when you get the chance. Your friend always......Mustapha. Just That Archaic Poet October 10, 2013 at 7:32 PM My creativity got jump started after my near death overdose back in July. Thanks as always for the read and reply, Mustapha :)

Karen Anglesey October 10, 2013 at 2:54 PM Your experimental piece is quite brilliant.. :) Just That Archaic Poet October 10, 2013 at 3:52 PM <3 Thanks, hon :)

Joseph Matose October 9, 2013 at 1:21 PM A bomb blast in the midst of my reticent mind! Your experimental pieces have become detrimental to a languid mind! They push one to the limit of imagination.... I love your style my man. Keep up the beat! Friend. JM Just That Archaic Poet October 10, 2013 at 12:32 PM Joseph, your kind, thoughtful and supportive words mean a great deal to me; I'm happy this piece made you feel that way. Many thanks, my friend! :)