Take the Ribbon From My Hair

With the dawning of the day Like a fertile vine which creeps amidst the purple hues of Tuscan fields I yield my fruit Before first autumn rain these eyes in wait for you Starved like a harvest moon you come to me Silk honey of dusk An opalescent shadow descending in the cradle of my arms Feeding nectar from my lips Ravishing my soul Amusing my solitude with blazing fire Upon scarlet foliage Our kiss 'Neath cashmere sheets your breath within me Dolce Vino Those fingers on my neck's nape Viola in concerto In sleep ,once again in dreams where eyelids close to the bliss of twilight dew I see you.
Dedicated to the man in my life !
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 11/28/2014 5:32:00 PM
It's not hard to meld, fuse, weld, like Ivy be entwined to your writes. That's me, historically, me, James, smiles to your poetry, always, Seamus x
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Date: 11/9/2014 3:42:00 PM
Beautiful...wafts of tender passion floating from dawn to dusk, encased in imagery and captivating phrases. Mellow love at its best! well done...once again! // paul
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Date: 11/5/2014 6:29:00 PM
beautifully penned charmaine golden pen flowing to an excellent piece
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Date: 11/5/2014 10:50:00 AM
"these eyes in wait for you Starved like a harvest moon" A soul poem...emancipating. Love, Charmaine xxxxxxxx rajat
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Date: 11/5/2014 4:27:00 AM
what a lyrical work of art filled with fascinating images and delicate impressions, charms.. this I adore!.. huggs
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Date: 11/4/2014 4:44:00 PM
Reading your poem was like drinking sweet cream -- smooth, creamy, and taste so good! Well done!
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Date: 11/4/2014 3:46:00 PM
Fabulous to see him again your dreams... He is always waiting for you and your soul....love it...flows like the wind....hugs Tim
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Date: 11/4/2014 2:32:00 PM
Spontaneous flow of heartfelt love...The love is abstract!!! I tried to seek the source of love...Poem of worship...Dear, The time is the best time for your great poems...Best to you....
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Date: 11/4/2014 2:23:00 PM
Ooh fancy words silky and smooth your dreams glide like water on ice, well said.
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Date: 11/4/2014 2:17:00 PM
I truly agree with Jan.. this is a remarkable write."Neath cashmere sheets your breath within me"...love that line.
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Date: 11/4/2014 2:08:00 PM
!Wow what a sensual write Charmaine - such incredible imagery I LOVE it! Hugs Jan xxx
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