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Take the Ribbon From My Hair

With the dawning of the day like a fertile vine which creeps amidst the purple hue of Tuscan fields I yield my fruit Before first autumn rain I wait for you Starved like a harvest moon you come to me Silk honey of dusk A shadow,descending in the cradle of my arms feeding nectar from my lips repeaning my soul with blazing fire amuzing my solitude On scarlet foliage-your kiss In sleep your breath within me ~Dolce Vino~ Your fingers on my neck's nape ~Viola in concerto~ In sleep,once again in sleep where eyelids close to the bliss of twilight dew I see you Dedicated to a great dad to our newborn...my husband

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/26/2013 7:19:00 AM
This is incredible! Truly incredible...
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Date: 1/22/2013 11:40:00 AM
I had to reread it... I loved it so. Beautiful dedication to a soul mate.
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Date: 12/12/2012 3:00:00 PM
I am back for a re-read ...it just gets better... David
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Date: 12/12/2012 7:23:00 AM
A beautiful write Charma love xx
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Date: 12/11/2012 6:37:00 PM
Beautiful poem Charma, I really enjoyed my reading towards to your verses :D, thank you for your comment before in my page,it is really uplifting :D - Hug, Yanny
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Date: 12/10/2012 9:45:00 PM
Charma, your poem is very beautiful... once again I'm very happy for you... pd
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Date: 12/10/2012 5:03:00 AM
charma, I've been reading some of your work and I'm very impressed by it, I've read quite a lot of it actually to get a good picture of you as a writer and I think you're a natural, a born poet, some of the phrasing is completely inspired and just sublime...you remind me of someone, a poet called leanne o'sullivan, and this poem in particular is very much after her style :-)
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 12/10/2012 9:04:00 AM
I will search leanne o sullivan..tnks so much dear for reading my humble verses
Date: 12/9/2012 6:58:00 PM
It's wonderful to see you so happy in love with your husband , Charma and writing him this beautiful romantic poem. Did he love it? Dolce vino is such a yummy line. I hope your address is the same as the one i put in my address book that year you sent me a sweet card. I am sending you one this year. Luv, Andrea
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 12/10/2012 9:02:00 AM
And tnks for reading dear
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 12/10/2012 9:01:00 AM
He loved the fact that i dedicated to him as a great dad:)
Date: 12/9/2012 9:51:00 AM
Wow; this is beautiful Charma, once again congratulations with the edition to your family ;) love Wilma
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Date: 12/9/2012 7:53:00 AM
Charma, the words just flow and are very poetic...very well done...David
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Date: 12/9/2012 7:07:00 AM
Very nice my dear friend... Wonderful dedication... hugs Michael
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Date: 12/9/2012 7:00:00 AM
Beautiful poem.
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