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Take the Lead

God does not always respond the way one expects.



Its branches dressed in luscious green leaves
From the young look of the spring season
The cherry blossom tree had lost its sheen,
The petals of its flowers faded spread around its feet.

Of its pink blossoms, it had been so proud
Spreading their sweet fragrance thereabout 
Attracting couples young and old to sprawl
Expressing their love, such joy all about.

Now fewer people came by and when they did
Walked on by without even looking at it
It felt so alive in the presence of love, what a gift!
Had wanted this feeling never to end, but it did.

Said a little prayer to its Maker
Asked Him if he could bring back the flowers
It seemed to make people so happy
But nothing happened, and the tree felt lonely.

One day a young woman came by
She sat at its feet and began to cry
The tree felt in her the same sadness of loss
And wished it could comfort her somehow.

Said a little prayer again to its Maker
Asked Him how he could bring joy to her
A little wind began to blow suddenly
As if the Maker acknowledged its plea.

Its current detached one of its leaves
That fell on her right cheek upon a tear
With her fingers, she caught the leaf
Palm open, she looked at it without a speech.

A smile spread on her pink lips
For she saw in it a special gift
She wiped her face with the leaf
And turned her face up to the tree.

With a sparkle in her eyes, she said sweetly,
“Thank you. You lost all your flowers recently
Yet you gave me a gift of hope with this leaf
I know now I can take the lead.” 


By CarolineCécile, April 24, 2009.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/25/2010 2:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poetry this week Caroline. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/20/2010 3:57:00 AM
Well done with this fine write, indeed deserved of praise
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Date: 12/19/2010 9:22:00 PM
A wonderful poem. Congratulations on being featured this week. Hope to meet you this Tuesday in El Cajon. Love, Iolanda
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Date: 12/19/2010 5:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week..It is just one page ahead of mine..Very descriptive work..Sara
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Date: 12/19/2010 4:56:00 PM
Congrats Caroline on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a wonderful one to share with us all today with luv .. happy holidays to u and yours from us..
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Date: 8/22/2009 10:13:00 AM
Terrific poem Caroline>>James
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Date: 6/30/2009 4:09:00 PM
fun! Caroline! it's true, a slight spiritual nudge is sometimes all it takes!...love the last 3-stanza's in particular!!! real magic, this one is!... jim
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