Take That Risk

Take that risk Enlighten and empower yourself Never stop growing Entertain, edify, and reach for that top shelf The gold is yours Be willing to broaden your mind The answer is there within Just take things one step at a time

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 5/13/2017 7:20:00 AM

A most positive debut message of hope, BSP. I can tell I'm gonna like reading your work. Love the verve and vibe of your words. Love and peace to you.

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 5/19/2016 6:04:00 AM

That's a very inspirational piece..... Congrats for having it featured in the Poetry Sup homepage!! ;-)

Abdiel Rios

Date: 5/18/2016 9:25:00 AM

This poem motivates me

Jan Allison

Date: 4/26/2016 1:58:00 PM

wise words indeed - great first poem welcome to Poetry soup:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A

Date: 4/26/2016 8:59:00 AM

The Brooklyn Six Project, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Manmath Dalei

Date: 4/26/2016 12:43:00 AM

Hi Brooklyn, Nice & amazing first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Wish u a successful journey ahead........hugs

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/25/2016 10:50:00 PM

Brooklyn SP, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Donald J Bennett

Date: 4/25/2016 10:49:00 PM

I am pleased to see you posting here at Poetry Soup and welcome aboard. Hope to see more of your writes.

Moon Flower

Date: 4/25/2016 10:35:00 PM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, The Brooklyn Six Project. :)