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Playing off your intent, writhing as you plunder within the dank dampness, the wanton wave spray painting effigies like Pollack pole axed in delight my pelvis rises… With hands full of Adonis’s moons parting the skin of your throat with pearly teeth, clawing back, ripping wide the broad side the effigy of a biblical God. Breath warms the conical rises fingers wind in the curls at the nape of neck, the hollow of your throat, a salt lick capping the wave brings froth to the fecund cave of desire.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/9/2012 8:08:00 PM
Wow an amazing write Deb. Last one I am reading tonight. Tired and believe it or not -at 9- I am ready for bed. So have a nice weekend. love phyl
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Date: 11/7/2012 4:45:00 PM
As per the last comment...I don't know know what you're trying to do either Deb!...Don't give a damn either...none of my beeswax or anyone else's...Heck, I think he's a sexy looking guy!...Um...wait a minute here...you don't think...No, No!...I swear to God I never...Luv ya Deb! (in spite of the fact you're a big pain in the ass... LOL!) - Timothy H. Ryerson at your service madame
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Date: 11/7/2012 4:49:00 PM
Forgot to tell you...it's a done deal Deb!...Hope it's the one you like...it makes a rather vague reference to life/death etc. so that's the one I picked
Date: 11/7/2012 1:41:00 AM
Whew!!...HOT! I'm envying Chris! Good stuff cher!...Brain lock on your Trinity contest so I entered an oldie...is that a no-no?...Ouch! You didn't have to HIT me did you?...I'm wounded, don't you pity me? Now I'm gonna need one of your therapy sessions...
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Date: 11/7/2012 12:17:00 AM
Dear Debbie,,,how are you.. hope everything is great with you,,,thank you for sharing your powerful poem..fantastic write!!! enjoyed !!! <3<3<3 SK
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Date: 11/6/2012 7:38:00 PM
It is morning here --Nov 7th.
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Date: 11/6/2012 7:36:00 PM
Wow:))))
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