Take Please My Hands

Come my darling and take please my hands When the tender birds are fast asleep When the stars would weep upon the sands And the sultry trees, our secrets keep For by the verdant paths and mountain's steep There our love would spring like flowers In all the night's enchanted hours Would you take my hands to softly tread The fields that hangs the amour moon When all the world and night is dead In this gladsome spring of June But before the morn returns to soon I bow my knees in love's fair plea To say my love,would you marry me?
~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Its a Rime Royal Sonnet.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 9/25/2013 7:32:00 AM
How could she resist! This is so romantic.
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Date: 7/7/2013 8:50:00 AM
Really well written. That's why I believe she said yes.... Love you, my brother... Jake
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 7/23/2013 3:24:00 PM
Thank you Jake for that encouraging comment partner.
Date: 7/5/2013 5:29:00 PM
Sooo very romantoc and beautiful to read and reread.
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 7/5/2013 5:55:00 PM
Thank you Charmain for that beautiful comment my dear.
Date: 7/4/2013 2:47:00 PM
There is something so subtle, yet so amazing about simply holding one's hand. Your verse was beyond beautiful! You sure know how to wrap your reader in your heart. Love your romantic pieces. Keep it up! Always, Laura
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 7/5/2013 5:54:00 PM
Thank you dear Laura,what a lovely thing to say.
Date: 6/19/2013 8:39:00 AM
- Beautiful thoughts and romance fills your poem! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 7/5/2013 5:53:00 PM
Thank you Anne,warm greetings to you.Hugs
Date: 6/18/2013 10:28:00 AM
Wow a lovely marvelous rhymin poem i read tday, truly l'amour! I tel u yor luv wud b delightd if u show it to her.
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 7/5/2013 5:52:00 PM
Thank you S.zaynub for your wonderful comment buddy.
Date: 6/17/2013 12:20:00 PM
a paradise of wonderful longing; i am drowsy with the whiffs of your lines.. just lovely, lovely, mus...sigh!..:) huggs
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 7/5/2013 5:49:00 PM
Thank you dear Nette for that truly wonderful comment.hugs
Date: 6/17/2013 10:21:00 AM
Take my hand M...sweep me away, your poetry blows me away!!! Pure romance thankyou my friend:) cheriebunny..
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 6/22/2013 7:09:00 PM
Hey Cheriebunny,nice to see you my friend.Thanks for your wonderful comment dear one.
Date: 6/17/2013 9:09:00 AM
So very romantic. Loved the ending. The words and flow were outstanding.
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 6/22/2013 7:07:00 PM
Thank you Carol for your wonderful comment.So uplifting.
Date: 6/17/2013 8:02:00 AM
such delicate tenderness Dear Friend a sonnet that sings to me masterful write love Shadow x
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 6/19/2013 10:45:00 AM
Thank you dear for your wonderful comment.Big hugs .
Date: 6/17/2013 7:46:00 AM
Your writing is so professional...it flows perfectly...
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 6/19/2013 8:55:00 AM
Thank you Donna for your encouraging words.Big hugs to you.
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