Take Please My Hands

Come my darling and take please my hands When the tender birds are fast asleep When the stars would weep upon the sands And the sultry trees, our secrets keep For by the verdant paths and mountain's steep There our love would spring like flowers In all the night's enchanted hours Would you take my hands to softly tread The fields that hangs the amour moon When all the world and night is dead In this gladsome spring of June But before the morn returns to soon I bow my knees in love's fair plea To say my love,would you marry me?
~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Its a Rime Royal Sonnet.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Lamoureux Avatar
September 25, 2013 at 7:32 AM
How could she resist! This is so romantic.
Posey Avatar
July 7, 2013 at 8:50 AM
Really well written. That's why I believe she said yes.... Love you, my brother... Jake
Mohammed Avatar
July 23, 2013 at 3:24 PM
Thank you Jake for that encouraging comment partner.
Chircop Avatar
July 5, 2013 at 5:29 PM
Sooo very romantoc and beautiful to read and reread.
Mohammed Avatar
July 5, 2013 at 5:55 PM
Thank you Charmain for that beautiful comment my dear.
Breidenthal Avatar
July 4, 2013 at 2:47 PM
There is something so subtle, yet so amazing about simply holding one's hand. Your verse was beyond beautiful! You sure know how to wrap your reader in your heart. Love your romantic pieces. Keep it up! Always, Laura
Mohammed Avatar
July 5, 2013 at 5:54 PM
Thank you dear Laura,what a lovely thing to say.
Andresen Avatar
June 19, 2013 at 8:39 AM
- Beautiful thoughts and romance fills your poem! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Mohammed Avatar
July 5, 2013 at 5:53 PM
Thank you Anne,warm greetings to you.Hugs
Kamoonpuri Avatar
June 18, 2013 at 10:28 AM
Wow a lovely marvelous rhymin poem i read tday, truly l'amour! I tel u yor luv wud b delightd if u show it to her.
Mohammed Avatar
July 5, 2013 at 5:52 PM
Thank you S.zaynub for your wonderful comment buddy.
Onclaud Avatar
June 17, 2013 at 12:20 PM
a paradise of wonderful longing; i am drowsy with the whiffs of your lines.. just lovely, lovely, mus...sigh!..:) huggs
Mohammed Avatar
July 5, 2013 at 5:49 PM
Thank you dear Nette for that truly wonderful comment.hugs
Thomas Avatar
June 17, 2013 at 10:21 AM
Take my hand M...sweep me away, your poetry blows me away!!! Pure romance thankyou my friend:) cheriebunny..
Mohammed Avatar
June 22, 2013 at 7:09 PM
Hey Cheriebunny,nice to see you my friend.Thanks for your wonderful comment dear one.
Eastman Avatar
June 17, 2013 at 9:09 AM
So very romantic. Loved the ending. The words and flow were outstanding.
Mohammed Avatar
June 22, 2013 at 7:07 PM
Thank you Carol for your wonderful comment.So uplifting.
Hamilton Avatar
June 17, 2013 at 8:02 AM
such delicate tenderness Dear Friend a sonnet that sings to me masterful write love Shadow x
Mohammed Avatar
June 19, 2013 at 10:45 AM
Thank you dear for your wonderful comment.Big hugs .
Jones Avatar
June 17, 2013 at 7:46 AM
Your writing is so professional...it flows perfectly...
Mohammed Avatar
June 19, 2013 at 8:55 AM
Thank you Donna for your encouraging words.Big hugs to you.
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