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 repost 9/3/2015

Take My Hand Not My Life Life special moments of splendors Smoldering away like embers Silently yearning to be wanted But always undesired ~ Take my hand not my life ~ Tolerate me don't persecute me I will work and support myself and family just so I won't go back to the human abuse I exist in perpetual fear of detection and deportation. ~ Little innocent babe's lurks behind For the wonderful feelings of being united in oneness Instead of random denial ~ S pirit T ends I n L eading L ives E nlighten X enagogue I mpowers S elfless T ruth Unity of our souls gives us courage and strength
Xenagogue = a guide Free Verse and Acrostic

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Date: 6/5/2020 11:10:00 AM
A masterful write Eve, evidence of your talent, thanks for sharing!
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Date: 5/14/2020 2:13:00 AM
This is a beautiful poem Eve; you are doing well sheltering in place! Extremely well! Your poetry is showing this.
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Date: 5/14/2020 1:29:00 AM
Combinations of poetry styles work well as the did for you Eve in this poem of free verse and acrostic - deep philosophical write. Blessings and hugs,Eve, Jennifer.
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Date: 5/12/2020 4:59:00 AM
Great combination of Free verse and Acrostic. Very well composed. Thanks for sharing, Eve. All the best!
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