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Take Me To The Water

Take me to the water once again where seashells are cradled by the soft lull of shore's end sitting contented and ladled At the seaside two discarded oars traded in for a summer jaunt across the waters, a dormi d'or waving at an early morning font... Lead me to God's paradise on earth and dip me in the waters blue for I am a piscean girl at birth and I'll know just what to do When you glide me into waters deeper than the ocean floor I'll be a doting good daughter just open me the door.

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Date: 6/23/2024 5:29:00 PM
Beautiful, flowing rhyme that brings to mind sweet summertime! There's just something about water... enjoyed this! Xo
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Date: 6/2/2024 11:46:00 AM
"Lead me to God's paradise on earth and dip me in the waters blue for I am a piscean girl at birth and I'll know just what to do." Such lovely words Rose. I'm sure you'll ride along in those tides. Cheers.
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Date: 6/2/2024 10:33:00 AM
So beautiful dear Viena...
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Date: 6/2/2024 8:13:00 AM
A captivating poetry that explores your profound affinity for the ocean and your wish to reunite with it. Also, it centers on a profound affection for the ocean. Perfect imagery of the coastline, and the peace it evokes. Thanks for the visit and comment.
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Date: 6/2/2024 8:11:00 AM
Come July, hopefully our waters will be warm and calm. You have an open invitation. Come and swim in salty waters without added chemicals. Hugs.
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Date: 6/1/2024 12:54:00 PM
Wonderfully romantic! You get another FAV! Blessings.
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Date: 6/1/2024 2:31:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed the poem dear poet friend, thanks for your kind visit :)

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