Take Me To The Water



Take me to the water once again 
where seashells are cradled 
by the soft lull of shore's end
sitting contented and ladled 

At the seaside two discarded oars 
traded in for a summer jaunt 
across the waters, a dormi d'or 
waving at an early morning font...

Lead me to God's paradise on earth 
and dip me in the waters blue 
for I am a piscean  girl at birth 
and I'll know just what to do 

When you glide me into waters 
deeper than the ocean floor 
I'll be a doting good daughter 
just open me the door.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Woods Avatar
June 23, 2024 at 5:29 PM
Beautiful, flowing rhyme that brings to mind sweet summertime! There's just something about water... enjoyed this! Xo
George Avatar
June 2, 2024 at 11:46 AM
"Lead me to God's paradise on earth and dip me in the waters blue for I am a piscean girl at birth and I'll know just what to do." Such lovely words Rose. I'm sure you'll ride along in those tides. Cheers.
One Avatar
June 2, 2024 at 10:33 AM
So beautiful dear Viena...
Poet Avatar
June 2, 2024 at 8:13 AM
A captivating poetry that explores your profound affinity for the ocean and your wish to reunite with it. Also, it centers on a profound affection for the ocean. Perfect imagery of the coastline, and the peace it evokes. Thanks for the visit and comment.
Buhagiar Avatar
June 2, 2024 at 8:11 AM
Come July, hopefully our waters will be warm and calm. You have an open invitation. Come and swim in salty waters without added chemicals. Hugs.
DiMino Avatar
June 1, 2024 at 12:54 PM
Wonderfully romantic! You get another FAV! Blessings.
Rose  Avatar
June 1, 2024 at 2:31 PM
Glad you enjoyed the poem dear poet friend, thanks for your kind visit :)
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