Take Me To a Place!

Take Me To A Place!

Take me to a place
where angels and fairies
fly with great might 
across fields and prairies

A place filled with roses
and tulips and flowers
where fields are watered
with diamond showers

A place where horses fly
high across the rainbow
where all the magic fruits
and talking trees grow

Where animals and people
all speak the same tongue
where there's no riot or hunting
or no one with a frown

Where there's always peace
in a place filled with color
where there's a merry tune 
played always and forever.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Brown Avatar
March 11, 2009 at 9:42 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
Babcock Avatar
March 11, 2009 at 9:29 AM
Some days we all want to be in that place. Congrats on your featured write. God Bless Phyl
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
March 11, 2009 at 9:11 AM
One of the reasons I love Disney World. This place sounds magical too. Congratulations Maryam on "Take Me To A Place!" being featured. Vince
Townsend Avatar
March 9, 2009 at 4:31 PM
I want to go to this enchanted place. It sounds so wonderful and peaceful. Congratulations on being featured it is definately well deserved. Smiles from Lolita
Mason Avatar
March 9, 2009 at 3:53 PM
I'd want to go to that place too except for the music all the time ... LOL ... as a lover of silence I could really get into the rest of your wonderful world ... Congratulations on your writing being featured this week here at PoetrySoup, Maryam!
Gass Avatar
March 9, 2009 at 1:21 PM
Congratulations on this beautiful write being featured this week, Maryam! Love, Robin
Reinke Avatar
March 9, 2009 at 1:21 PM
congrats...I learned I was featured today and many poets wrote me to congraululate me...I thought it was so sweet..sfo I am doing it too. Liked your poem, I want to find that place. cat
Mckenzie Avatar
March 9, 2009 at 1:21 PM
Very nice magical place Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)
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March 9, 2009 at 12:39 PM
Sounds like a good place to me. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
Heck Avatar
March 9, 2009 at 10:55 AM
Maryam - Congratulations on your poem being featured this week! Very well deserved. Peace always, John
Swanson Avatar
March 9, 2009 at 6:16 AM
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful. I wanna go too. ;) Congrats on your lovely and inspiring poetry being featured this week, well-deserved. Love, Amy :)
Winter Avatar
March 9, 2009 at 6:14 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
Jordan Avatar
March 8, 2009 at 10:09 PM
Maryam - very uplifting and beautiful - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
Faulkner Avatar
January 3, 2009 at 4:24 PM
really cool poem. just like another one of your poems this reminded me of a song. (dispatch- flying horses) great write
Gass Avatar
December 31, 2008 at 4:27 PM
Excellent poem, Maryam! The imagery is great and reading it gives you a happy, uplifting feeling. Happy New Year! Love, Robin
Montgomery Avatar
December 10, 2008 at 9:10 AM
Aww this is really sweet :)
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