Notes About The Poem

Take Me By the Hand

Take me by the hand
into the sunset.
There's a place for us;
a tranquil haven
to get away from...

the world's madness;
so come with me! 
Let's discover
what true bliss is!

Free to roam,
and just be;
you and I.

Take me 
by the...
 
hand.


STRAND completely new (14)any theme any form (Winner: 1st Place)
Sponsored by Brian Strand
Date written: 07/26/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Mishra Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 12:50 AM
'Free to roam and just be'....love this soothing muse of yours Edward. Congratulations on your win my friend! :)
Ibeh Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 4:26 AM
Thank you very much, Aditi:-) Blessings to you, my friend! xoxo
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 11:23 PM
Wow, an awesome write, Edward, for this difficult form for me, my compliments for your well deserved 1st Place win, my friend -- Aloha~@William
Ibeh Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 4:28 AM
Thanks so much, William:-) Most appreciated.
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