Take Me Away

Im just so uhh.. I don’t know. 
Today I show my true colors on my obvious suffering, 
guessing whats wrong whats right im not sure 
but for tonight I sit in a life filled with blight. 
Slight sighs away to fade to black, impact, destroy your soul 
make yourself into a concrete block full of nothingness only to sink to the bottom of the ocean.
I explode implode into a hardened state and remain benign till the end of time. 
Oh oh it would feel so fine just to become divine, one with the earth.

It’s a message.
im not sure I’ll ever learn what to do here
im lost at a stop sign with a hundred thousand turns. 
Frozen im wrapped and clung to this world of cold and harsh elements 
putting strain on my vital organs raping my soul of happiness. 
Making greatness seem so far away 
I fade to blue and sink deep to the bottom of the volcano 
becoming incinerated into something in the air to rest and roam free in life 
only to see what I could have been 
and sit and kill my brain cells with a negative mold of algae that is slowly breaking me into 
debris. Breaking me down breaking me down to a place in the ground that is so unsound 
that makes my life feel bound with a mission impossible asterisk on my name 
dictating the conclusion of my freedom.
so save me please save me from a place I don’t belong for I can go on no longer.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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