Jack Ellison Poet Limerick

Take Heed

In the delightful still of the cool evening air
Caution need be taken so please be prepared
Got a big axe to grind
Affects the weather at times
My image is lovable but take heed mon cher

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Judith S January 1, 2018 at 11:32 AM Cool evening air? I do believe it's downright freezing evening air at this time of year ;) ? Jack Ellison January 1, 2018 at 2:26 PM Cool enough to freeze the *** of a *** monkey eh!!! LOL Coldest December in my memory!!! Love, Jacko! xxx

Silent One January 1, 2018 at 10:30 AM Jack was such an attention whore, but deep down he was such a bore. When he went blah blah blah, all peeps went wah wah wah, fell asleep and began to snore! lol. Jack Ellison January 1, 2018 at 2:23 PM HA! "attention whore"... bang on! You nailed it!

Silent One January 1, 2018 at 10:26 AM Oooohhhh...... You are tooo sweet.. lol Jack Ellison January 1, 2018 at 2:21 PM I know I know sometimes I can't even stand me myself

Lim'Rik Flats January 1, 2018 at 7:30 AM I will be taking heeding//because your words I'm needing//Grind your axe//drive some tacks//It's alright ma (I'm only bleeding) (with credit to Bob Dylan Pickle for the last line) MON CHER JACQUES BEAR!!! Jack Ellison January 1, 2018 at 2:19 PM Bob Dylan Pickle??? lol Moderating temps up here but not for another week! In the meantime, your Zona warmth is helping!!!