Take Heed

In the delightful still of the cool evening air Caution need be taken so please be prepared Got a big axe to grind Affects the weather at times My image is lovable but take heed mon cher

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Judith S

Date: 1/1/2018 11:32:00 AM

Cool evening air? I do believe it's downright freezing evening air at this time of year ;) ?

Jack Ellison
Date: 1/1/2018 2:26:00 PM

Cool enough to freeze the *** of a *** monkey eh!!! LOL Coldest December in my memory!!! Love, Jacko! xxx

Silent One

Date: 1/1/2018 10:30:00 AM

Jack was such an attention whore, but deep down he was such a bore. When he went blah blah blah, all peeps went wah wah wah, fell asleep and began to snore! lol.

Jack Ellison
Date: 1/1/2018 2:23:00 PM

HA! "attention whore"... bang on! You nailed it!

Silent One

Date: 1/1/2018 10:26:00 AM

Oooohhhh...... You are tooo sweet.. lol

Jack Ellison
Date: 1/1/2018 2:21:00 PM

I know I know sometimes I can't even stand me myself

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 1/1/2018 7:30:00 AM

I will be taking heeding//because your words I'm needing//Grind your axe//drive some tacks//It's alright ma (I'm only bleeding) (with credit to Bob Dylan Pickle for the last line) MON CHER JACQUES BEAR!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 1/1/2018 2:19:00 PM

Bob Dylan Pickle??? lol Moderating temps up here but not for another week! In the meantime, your Zona warmth is helping!!!