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Hutinashro
Created by Connor Lotts, Each line has eight syllables. Iambic tetrameter is optional. Divide the poem into three stanzas, 12 lines in the first two, with an (Aabccbddbeeb) rhyme scheme. The first two stanzas share the first line. The last stanza is an aba rhyme scheme.

        

I fear people have lost their way; now, hatred and lies rule the day; our morels faded over time. Purchasing political will; cult leaders are prepared to kill, perpetuating fear through crime. They claim that they believe in God, but that declaration is fraud. Faith has morphed into a pastime; a mockery of true belief. Exploiting people's pain and grief; greed fuels anxieties climb. Alternative truths are all lies, merely bigotry in disguise. "Love thy neighbor" was God's decree; not manipulate them through fear. Such behavior warrants a tear, and I believe God would agree. And yet, evangelists, meanwhile, preach all immigrants are hostile. Heaven's locked; love's the only key, and no other will get you through. On judgment day, God will judge you, that's Jesus's Divine guarantee. Search your heart to locate your soul; work to heal one another's pain, refuse to be led; take control.

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Date: 7/24/2024 11:17:00 AM
Hello Emile, I agree with your poetry. It will be my fav. Enjoy your day my friend. Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/24/2024 4:54:00 PM
Hello Emile, thank you Emile. so are you my friend. My frikend. Enjoy your evening. /Darlene/
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/24/2024 12:14:00 PM
Thanks, Darlene, you are a kind soul, my friend. Emile.
Date: 7/24/2024 10:59:00 AM
Dear emile, this is so thoughtful and so beautifully woven with so many truths, every word in this, i agree with, i hope and pray for a world that only celebrates love and light and not darkness and hate… i love especially “work to heal one another's pain,” thats so touching and “Heaven's locked; love's the only key, and no other will get you through. On judgment day, God will judge you,” i agree! A fave this is! Sending you light always!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/24/2024 12:13:00 PM
Thank you so much; you honor me, my friend. Emile.
Date: 7/24/2024 10:33:00 AM
Powerful indictment. My latest poem is very similar. And thx for the premium membership. To say it was a surprise is an understatement
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/24/2024 12:12:00 PM
Thanks, Tom. You are welcome. I enjoy your poetry and will check out your latest posting, my friend Emile.
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Date: 7/24/2024 11:00:00 AM
Wow emile got you membership? Thats so kind and thoughtful! Well deserved
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