Jack Ellison Poet Quatrain

Take a Number, Girls

(All in fun, my friends!!!)


In spite of my charm and amazing good looks
There are things I want you to know
I don't wear undies on weekdays and Saturdays
Which leaves only Sundays to go

Undies sure inhibit my freedom of movement
While I strut up and down the mall
My sexiness is not something I usually can hide
Exuding my sweet charms to all

Guess I might sound like an raving egomaniac
One look and you'll surely know why
This hunk of humanity has been dazzling the ladies
Since I was just a wee tike of a guy

So I'll be taking requests from you ladies
To enjoy my sweet charms for a night
The cost relates directly to the perceived value
So take a number for a heavenly flight


© Jack Ellison 2015

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Laura Breidenthal June 11, 2015 at 12:13 AM Nice one!!! Made me smile, imagining you strut all over the mall ^__^ Always, Laura Jack Ellison June 11, 2015 at 8:10 AM Quite a sight to see... LOL Love, Jackson xxx

Kp Nunez June 4, 2015 at 6:48 PM I'm not taking a number// since there are many others//hope I didn't puncture// your airy adventure//such megalomaniac thunder!!! :-) :-) Good evening santa! Jack Ellison June 4, 2015 at 8:22 PM You don't need to take a number... you've already been accepted! LOL xxx

Tim Smith June 4, 2015 at 6:18 PM lol...I see them lining up Jack Ellison June 4, 2015 at 6:37 PM It's a stampede!!!!!!!!!! Save yourself!

Carol Eastman June 4, 2015 at 1:44 PM Crazy, naughty... and modest, too... We love you LimmerJack... ERR... But more in a platonic way... LOL Jack Ellison June 4, 2015 at 6:37 PM Most of all MODEST!!! LOL xxxxxxxx

Toquyen Harrell June 4, 2015 at 7:52 AM Yeah, freedom Jack. Hooray :) Jack Ellison June 4, 2015 at 7:55 AM Hope Cathie doesn't read this or she will beat me AGAIN!!! LOL Hugs, Jack xxx

Jan Allison June 4, 2015 at 7:41 AM Glad its fun Jack or Cathie would be packing you off in an empty packing crate lol:-) Hugs jxn Jack Ellison June 4, 2015 at 7:44 AM Cathie understands my needs... I think! LOL Hugs, Jack xxx

Judy Konos June 4, 2015 at 7:16 AM I'll take number '36...let the other 35 get a load of what's in store first! Jack Ellison June 4, 2015 at 7:21 AM ARE YOU SURE!!! Although I'm usually good for 50 or so, I do start to slow down in the 30s! How about if you change it to 8 or 9 and then AGAIN at 36! I'd actually prefer that! I'm waiting with bated breath for your decision dear Judy! Huggsies, Jack xxx

John Williams June 4, 2015 at 7:00 AM Gee, I wish I had what you have Jack. Perhaps you could bottle some and send it to Australia. Terrific poem Jack, keep it up....kind regards----John Jack Ellison June 4, 2015 at 7:10 AM As I said, all in fun!!! LOL Sending some to you guys as we speak!!! Cheers, Jack