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Don’t forget the insect repellent

Mosquitoes can cause such discontent

     These bugs make me itch

     Watch me swat and twitch

The cost of “Off” is money well spent




Written April 3, 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/8/2014 8:15:00 AM
Simple yet thoughtful ! Thats the beauty of poetry ! Well deserved top win Carolyn! Congrats!
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Date: 4/8/2014 2:54:00 AM
Obviously the poem is not "Off". Loved this - well done and congrats Ron
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Date: 4/8/2014 12:01:00 AM
great wit in this one, Carolyn. BIG congrats in Susan's contest.
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Date: 4/7/2014 8:10:00 PM
A truth that makes you smile is a winner and your poem is truly reflective of that, congrats!
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Date: 4/7/2014 7:56:00 PM
Well written Carolyn... Verlena
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Date: 4/7/2014 4:34:00 PM
Congrats on win Carolyn; pretty limerick :) and those mosquitos can be such a handful!! // paul
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Date: 4/4/2014 4:59:00 PM
LOL yup you do need that deet! Light & Love
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Date: 4/3/2014 10:13:00 PM
Oh how I agree with you my friend! There are many different products of "Off" that you can use to keep those creatures off of you! The most popular is the spray, as that was the original form! I really enjoyed reading this wonderful poem here this evening What a masterful piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 4/3/2014 7:35:00 PM
It's not easy being a bug Always shunned by those In whom you love No need to pay To drive me away I know when, I've out lasted my stay Bezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz swat !!! Carolyn, I enjoyed the read
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Date: 4/3/2014 4:21:00 PM
Reads like a winner if for a contest..Way to go..I hope that you have a large bottle on hand..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 4/3/2014 4:00:00 PM
Yes it is.. I love the "off" they call dry.
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Date: 4/3/2014 3:42:00 PM
The manufacturer should use this limerick in their advertising. Good job, and it's good to see you back on this site again.
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