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Take a Breath

draw in many breaths

pure crisp cotton snowy air

jagged peaks beckon

snare young and old to challenge

death defying runs of ice

Copyright © Kim Shaw | Year Posted 2015

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April 20, 2015 at 8:20 AM

great poem. As promised, I returned and I am glad I did because the freshness of your talents are yet again exhibited through these wonderful lines. Definitely a 7

Demetrios Trifiatis

March 10, 2015 at 8:55 AM

Images coming to life because of your captivating writing, dear Kimberly!

March 10, 2015 at 9:13 AM

I sincerely appreciate your stopping in to read my poems. Thank you for the special encouragement! Big hugs, Kimberly

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

March 10, 2015 at 12:19 AM

a challenging winter scenario and great imagery, Kimberly...I'm glad they don't beckon me! Hugs, Rhonda

March 10, 2015 at 9:10 AM

Thank you for stopping in with such kind remarks, Rhonda! I was remembering my long ago days in Banff National Park :) Hugs, Kimberly

Hija De La Luna

March 9, 2015 at 11:51 PM

i can sense it, Kimberly! lovely write!

March 10, 2015 at 9:08 AM

Thank you for the sweet comments, Hija! Hugs, Kimberly xx

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

March 9, 2015 at 11:42 PM

I can visualize the peaks and feel pure crisp cotton snowy air Kimberly . God bless>>>Rajat

March 10, 2015 at 9:07 AM

I am blessed by your kindness and very appreciative of your comments, Rajat! Hugs, Kimberly xx

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