Taj Mahal 1

TAJ MAHAL

In this October day, as usual,
Late  in  reaching  fulfillments
Memoried  paths  resenting familiarity
Historied tracks crumbling
A cloud-shred trailing a mass to merge
I walk into Taj and stop to find
Adorned love placed in an ornate pedestal.

Still selling their lights profitably are the sun and the moon
And getting her name yet again and finally is the Jamuna
O! unsung architect, why does not
This wafer get blown by the wind?
Where did you get this sky from,  
To stick your vision on?
Does the full moon become fuller
By holding a royal Mughal lantern
Will Jamuna loiter dazed by the punch-drunk fort for ever?

The Taj is in its all-white contemplation
On love birds, dogfights, nemesis and Nostradamus
And I walk through faded print with all words spent
Watching clouds forgiving crowds’ trespass into the skies..

S.Jagathsimhan Nair
* Written some twenty years ago and included in my book “RAINQUAKE”
For PD’s ‘Seven wonders of the world’ contest

For Andrea's 'Faves' contest again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Oyewole Avatar
April 28, 2013 at 8:55 AM
Congrats on your win Jag~A.O
Kendrick Avatar
April 27, 2013 at 5:36 PM
Congrats on your winning work in PD's contest...Sara
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April 26, 2013 at 8:11 PM
Jag, congrats with your 7 wonder poem <3 LUV ~*~SKAT
Harper Avatar
April 26, 2013 at 7:13 PM
Excellent poem about the lovely Taj Mahal, Jag, enjoued it, congratulations
Jones Avatar
April 26, 2013 at 1:41 PM
Imagine the Taj being *as usual* you are lucky to get to frequent this sight...congratulations friend
A   Avatar
April 24, 2013 at 7:34 PM
Jag, congratulations with your poem on Andrea's, favorite list. always~ Linda
Kendrick Avatar
April 23, 2013 at 4:42 PM
Congrats on being in Andrea's favs line-up...Sara
Mannan Avatar
April 22, 2013 at 10:58 PM
You make it come alive Jag. Many congrats dear friend.
Wesley Avatar
April 11, 2013 at 4:52 PM
Full of the mystery I feel about the Taj Jag; I read the story of how it came to be and think it is so romantic. Beautifully written! Luv, Lizzie
Carrillo Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 11:14 PM
This is beautiful. I don't know much about it. I have only seen it in movies. hanks for sharing this. Lucilla
Williams Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 8:03 AM
Jag, this is definitely a wow...David
Dietrich Avatar
April 6, 2013 at 5:09 PM
wow, this is really a good one for her contest, Jag. One of the best I've seen on the wonders of the world. I hope I can be as inspired when I try one as well.
Gorelick Avatar
April 1, 2013 at 8:55 PM
You were a great poem way back then too...I wish I knew more of the hystory so I could understand some of your references. BG
Jones Avatar
April 1, 2013 at 4:46 PM
Jag this is very visual and I wish I could see this in person....great poem..Donna
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April 1, 2013 at 4:06 PM
I'll be the first to comment - a really impressive poem jaggy, written with your usual depth :) (soupmail)
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