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Tainted..Desert

Tainted Desert
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A Silent drift
traveling swift
rising out 
settled among your shout
down toward your colon
through the swollen
passing you by
I am why?
close call
solid wall
undo the sail 
giving tale
love and peace
shattered tease
laugh with smile
completely vile 
magnetic strength
$h!t your length
conserving water
needs get hotter
I fill my thirst
drain your energy 
stuck in my quicksand 
spitting out dirt
My tainted desert 
                                      .      
((by;p.d.))

Dedicated to N.D.  (( Perfect Ocean ))

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Skat A

Date: 2/4/2016 11:19:00 PM

silent what? lol redue. lol **SKAT**

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/19/2014 7:53:00 PM

People, I noticed are very specific in their comments. Not me except occasionally. I like being a cheerleader. If I do not have a kind comment to make I just leave. Another great write what else can I say. You know who you are. You are a great writer and that's that.

David Scott

Date: 11/28/2012 7:03:00 AM

wicked flow rhythm love it i think the word shit ive used a few times in writes its good pause and funny to love it xxx davidscott

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/24/2011 6:13:00 AM

dark dark PD, I added more to Raven's tale let me know if it's stronger or weaker? Light & Love

John Loving Iii

Date: 12/7/2010 6:02:00 AM

may it never happen to me.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 12/4/2010 9:17:00 AM

me again here, lol-- and glad to know you had a good breakfast & thank goodness indeed for microwave but aack now I am hungry at past 1am-- mmmm maybe an egg sandwich would be good??? lol!! enjoy the rest of your day! :) hugs

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 12/2/2010 9:32:00 AM

Ouch, love seeing your poetry in a different style, shows a different you, very tight poem:)

M.I.A .

Date: 12/1/2010 7:14:00 PM

Oh wow!! loved it! you made the desert sounds bloody romantic ^.^

Anthony Beesley

Date: 11/30/2010 9:01:00 PM

a hotter than hot hottie

Matthew Anish

Date: 11/27/2010 8:58:00 PM

Interesting. What desert are you speaking of? Hope you had a nice holiday. Love Matthew Anish

Walayee Poet Lay Whitlock-Ishway

Date: 11/27/2010 3:36:00 PM

HOTT Poem! It has so many levels left for interpretation. I love it! Lay

Audrey Castaneda

Date: 11/26/2010 6:40:00 PM

Nice poem' love Audree

Kevin Semeniuk

Date: 11/26/2010 11:41:00 AM

great poem! nice flow!

Royal Trevino

Date: 11/26/2010 5:31:00 AM

I read Nathan's poem, what a match' =(^.^)= Royal

Skat A

Date: 11/25/2010 8:34:00 PM

LOVE IT~ Skat

Honesty Oimbo

Date: 11/24/2010 7:41:00 AM

the rhyme is just beautiful and effective just like the structure

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 11/23/2010 10:18:00 PM

The traitor is back-- aaackk --haha! Gosh only for today though--umm maybe-- Unique thoughts you have here pd & it could be interpreted in so many ways & that's cool...

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/23/2010 4:34:00 PM

Nice passion pd. Your heart pours out in this sweet write. Always Michael

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/23/2010 11:11:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your always outstanding poetry today P.D. I wish you a very Happy Thanksgiving if you observe the holiday. Love, Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 11/23/2010 10:20:00 AM

very interesting thoughts you have here pd :) unfortunately my head is now stuck in the sand-- haha I think Sandman POURED so much sand on me I am ready to doze off--zzzzz catch you again soon ok?

Daver Austin

Date: 11/23/2010 7:03:00 AM

A dry run. Unfortunate, but that's life, eh? You be good poet as usual. Love, Dave

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/23/2010 6:49:00 AM

Okey Dokey P.D. my BFF .. I put it together but listed it under Haiku ..some poets are listing their contest entries under Limerick ...which do u prefer? is it OK to leave it under Haiku? since it is the first form? make me dip back into my thoughts to write this piece for u luv.. hope u are entertained and will consider it for a winning spot luv.. enjoy your day .. thankxxx for your most appreciated blog comment on my RON.. my breath.. we will wait and see luv..

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/23/2010 6:15:00 AM

Hey PD, are you cooking for the holidays?? My sister is the cook...she is having us over for the holidays...YEAH!!

Charles Melody Lightning Ink

Date: 11/23/2010 5:41:00 AM

hay, PD. is been long time right? i understand the surface of this poem but not the inside. could you please explain it to me briefly in a soup mail? love, lightening ink.