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Tainted Hearts

So many people suffer 
as they condemn others with extreme hate
raping hearts violently shredding inner purity 
inside deep council cries as ugly visions hurt
tainted with nightshades
unforgiving it creates wars 
through such ugly bitterness
 
Twisted within a dark fork 
judgement overpowers emotions 
killing without mercy love and divine beauty 
A human virtue turned upside down 
in this world we all know our hearts plea
In what is right and what is wrong 

Yet we turn a blind eye ignoring the truth 
ignorance plays its roll 
as our soul is colorless 
we all bleed tears falling pain inside heartache 
raindrops of a deep hurt remains 
holding love as the most precious pure gift 
undying beauty will always remain beautiful

Copyright © Liam Mcdaid | Year Posted 2015

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Robert Lindley Date: 4/28/2015 8:12:00 AM Magnificent write my friend.. Completely dead on the mark. All this terrorism in the world today and yet its "source" cried to be innocent of teaching and thereby sponsoring it.. Hatred is being taught and it is called a religion. A7 on this gem... Login to Reply

Monterey Sirak Date: 4/26/2015 6:26:00 AM Stunning write! Your words tap gently on the heart of the reader reminding us we are not in this world alone and everyone needs love and eyes that see beauty. Login to Reply Liam Mcdaid Date: 4/26/2015 3:20:00 PM thank you monterey so true you words they sang in the eyes of wisdom peace is the way forward loving the beauty not its destruction wonderful comment dear pal deeply appreciated wishing you a blessed day

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/26/2015 5:23:00 AM - Strong and powerful words: "killing without mercy love and divine beauty" - A write that gives me goosebumps, because it is the "truth" of human behavior - All we can hope for: is that the love, beauty and justice will win in the end - A 7 + !!!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Liam Mcdaid Date: 4/26/2015 3:13:00 PM so true anne lise i watched something that really upset me dear pal two women executed in the east for the same crime many men in the same country commit its one sided love thy neighbor i say its against our grain to kill but some call it a form of justice i call it murdering if an animal kills its put down where is the justice just a word to control passing you a warm smile thanks

Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 4/25/2015 10:18:00 PM Hi Liam!A very beautiful poem you've written,sad but with a very true powerful message my dearest friend.I feel rivers of raw emotions reading this and I do feel your pain.I'm thankful to God no one can really destroy,steal from us many things we need to treasure,protect,like our souls,true love,dreams,beauty we see,not if we don't allow it.I won't!True love always conquers wins no matter what.Love is the most precious gift Gods given us,need to appreciate,defend,embrace it all way especially when we know is true and we're so lucky to have it.So proud of you for posting this magnificent piece.You'll help people Liam.You're a true gent!Thanks.Truly a mighty golden pen!A big 7+++!Please don't let this or anything destroy your true love,dreams hopes.To me you're always the best in everything Liam.Stay positive.Keep your faith!I pray for your quick complete healing!New dawn,better days coming soon.Wishing you a very lovely Sunday!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxoxD.^O^ Login to Reply Liam Mcdaid Date: 4/26/2015 3:06:00 PM thank you dorian dear friend for the wonderful comment oh i am positive this i wrote after i read of horrors and to see a world of people judging and violating others human rights and branding them with names shows the faces of hate religion is their favorite choice peace and love is the true face we should all have

Gary Bateman Date: 4/25/2015 10:04:00 PM Liam, A masterful write here Mate. Your words hit the mark as always!! (BTW. I've started my "slow return" to Poetry Soup). Well-Done as always!! A "7" / FAV. Best Always, Gary Login to Reply Liam Mcdaid Date: 4/26/2015 2:56:00 PM ah gary your so sweet pal always great to see you passing you a warm smile thanks kindly dear friend heartfelt comment