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Tainted Depths


Sour ground ... 
burial lots, where the worms defile
Tear moistened dirt
hardened by fretting hearts,
fearful of the pulse pendulum clock

Time moves mournfully on a crooked drop,
six-feet motion of tainted tick-tock
The skeleton key
can’t open casket thoughts 
bound by 
an unrepentant lock

Half-life decay of terminal haste
has an unsweetened
paper taste — 
Rectangular sawdust placed in toxic space,
as gravedigger eyes spark
an undertaker gaze
A mushroom cloudy view into
the catacomb maze

Everyone must darkly go 
on this nether journey;
tho’ some will choose to make
an urn-stipulated,
vain crematorium flee

Letting their ashes of demise
boast a false victory


4-24-21

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 5/12/2021 3:16:00 AM
Good Morning Freddie - It has been a long time since I've visited your page and work however you have a way with words that deliver a message thoughts and life ponderings and it is evident here in your entry. Thank you for sharing with us. May this day find you well.
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Date: 5/5/2021 9:52:00 PM
Powerful poetry, Freddie, so poetic and brings to light another aspect of the graveyard.
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Date: 4/24/2021 7:17:00 PM
Great write, Freddie! Fantastic metaphors froth with feeling.
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Date: 4/24/2021 6:41:00 PM
Interesting write, Freddie. I enjoyed it. It was a bit gloomy though, considering my wife's ashes reside in a nice cherry box at the end of my bed. Thanks for sharing.
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