Tailspin

To faire du genoux in Paris
They mounted a wheel called Ferris
A few times around
Without touching ground
And her eyes shone like Polaris
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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January 26, 2022 at 12:47 PM
Hi Rico, I echo what Tom said. I enjoyed the read. Have a nice day-Alexis
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January 26, 2022 at 11:49 AM
Interesting, Rico. I'm wondering whether her reaction was a result of the wheel or with whom she was enjoying it. Hmmm...
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January 26, 2022 at 10:43 AM
Must have been spinning at some speed or was it the champers lol. Tom
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